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Thinking Of Love |
Your Smile Heals Hearts Broken
And I dream of you now,
Tell me am I on your mind?
These boundaries of reality
Are imaginary lines.
Look inside your heart, love,
And should you find me there,
No walls can confine our passion,
Such a beautiful affair.
Do you dream of me now,
And trust in what is true?
Your smile heals hearts broken
And draws me close to you.
Follow the feelings inside, love,
And we'll dance on stars tonight.
I know you are lost as I,
But togethere we'll find the light.
| On April 29th 2008 thethreatIF Said : | |
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Awesome! |
| On April 2nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love it. I think because it's not all boring sappy. You definitely have a lovely way in words. My favorite so far. Of course I'm reading all backwards~ |
| On March 31st 2008 VampsLover Said : | |
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It's amazing that most guys write better poems than most girls.....Very nice!!!!!! |
| On March 23rd 2008 fgggfx Said : | |
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cute |
| On March 16th 2008 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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AW!!! Tha's adorable! very good.
~Vampyr~ |
| On March 13th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. I love it. Great job. |
| On March 13th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like this-it's witty and confident, but not to much that it takes away from the soft breaths of love. Nice job! |
| On March 12th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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Bitter, very bitter, but very good! |


