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Thinking Of Love |
Past, Present, Future, and All Between
Have I changed? I wonder.
When the past I have so longed for
Welcomes me back with open arms
I shy away, and I long no more.
Am I strange? I wonder.
When the present seemed cursed
I gave it away for past and future,
But along the way I've lost my nerve.
Am I sane? I wonder.
As the future inches closer still,
Again I long for the past knowing
Again I've changed, as I always will.
| On April 2nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I like the am I sane stanza~ |
| On March 12th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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i like it!! very nicely written |
| On March 12th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Different, but still very good. |
| On March 11th 2008 tswieberg Said : | |
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NICE |
| On March 11th 2008 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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a great way to start back, you've got some good momentum going now :) |
| On March 11th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I like it!!! Lovely |
| On March 11th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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The past always does seem to wait with open arms when one is trying to change. Very nice poem. |
| On March 11th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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Me likes me likes. |


