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Waiting For An Angel
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Created on 3-10-08
In an empty home with empty walls,
The second hand rises, and then it falls.
Soaked with smoke and alcohol,
This isn't life, no not at all.
A selfish prayer with no reply,
My voice it echoes, and then it dies.
A little piece of me somewhere inside
Swears to me, this isn't life.
And so I wonder to myself,
Who's to save me from this Hell?
Beauty and truth, a sweet angel,
I'll wait for you, and nothing else.
Please Login to post comments| On April 10th 2008 VampsLover Said : | |
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You really should get these published or something. You are really great with words! |
| On April 2nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love it. I like how it ends. It leaves you wondering. Very nicely written~ |
| On March 12th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. Absolutely beautiful. I could feel the pain, and the slight hope of an Angel coming to rescue you. Great job. I love it. |
| On March 11th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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AWWWWW....So sad |
| On March 11th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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Beautiful sadness. wonderful alliteration |
| On March 10th 2008 Xaynos Said : | |
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Wow....sad. But very beautiful. The imagery was fantastic. |
