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Falling Apart
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Created on 12-24-07
Im falling apart.
There's nothing left
But an empty soul
And a wasted breath
Filled with anxiety,
Hindered and forced.
So, give me eternity
And these words are yours
To disect and discredit,
For mistakes outweigh
All good intentions
At the end of the day...
The heroes have fallen,
The villain's inside.
No love and no mercy
Although I have tried
Time and time again
To right all the wrongs.
I'm falling apart,
And soon I'll be gone.
Please Login to post comments| On July 16th 2008 AlBobby Said : | |
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wow. very well written powerful poem. |
| On June 6th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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*speechless* I gotta say This is my favorite one. |
| On April 2nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is more me. I love it. I think better poetry stems from sadness sometimes. |
| On February 12th 2008 Babydotz Said : | |
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Aww... Very good... I like this writing! Lol Your a good writer |
| On January 20th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I'm really loving that one! The short lines are great-it sounds wonderful. |
| On January 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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i feel the same way sometimes |
| On December 26th 2007 AlBobby Said : | |
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...O_o
awesome. |
| On December 26th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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AH I love t his one so much!!! |
| On December 24th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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woah love it alot!! :) |
| On December 24th 2007 TresMechas Said : | |
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love it!
Hey I have a new poem called, "My Heart Can Go On...My Heart Can Heal!" Can you read and rate and give me ur thoughts about it plz! i would really appreciate it!! =D
~*Nina*~ |
| On December 24th 2007 blondemoment22 Said : | |
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GAH! amazing. |
| On December 24th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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*words* sorry |
| On December 24th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Again, great choice of word. I love this! |
| On December 24th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Again this hits home. I love the last two lines, they hit how I have been feeling lately straight on the head. Great job as usual. |
