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Thinking Of Love |
A Figment Of Your Fantasies
I never took a breath in your world
And these words never existed.
Fuck a ghost, Im an imaginary star
In a show that never ran,
But turn up the volume...
Can you hear my voice
Through the static of yesterday?
Do you remember when I was your hero?
Yet now, no more than the chill on your spine.
And what does it matter?
Take away every moment and still
Your life remained unchanged.
My life was a figment of your fantasies
That was never graced by God,
And these tears were never shed.
As no more than a play of shadows
I slipped away.
| On January 20th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This one is simply sad. I love the concept you created in it. Very well written! |
| On January 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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im in awe. loved the wording, the rythem, the flow, just everything |
| On December 26th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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very wow! absolutely amazing! you have a way with words! |
| On December 24th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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lovely! nice wording:D |
| On December 24th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Amazing! Awesome word choice! |
| On December 24th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Wow... It's so good I'm speechless. Fabulous job. |


