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For all who arent afraid to be different

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Moments I Live For

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I stood atop the hill,

Looking down at the wreckage left below.

I know in time I must turn around

And descend into the blank canvas on the other side.

But I need this moment to reflect.

 

For amongst the chaos

Lies moments worth the damage done.

My heart holds no regrets,

For I lived each day and welcomed every night,

As my eyes gazed beyond the obvious.

 

And this, I believe,

Is all that life should be.

I lived for the dreams that lived within me,

And would die with a smile upon my face,

Knowing I've found a truth of my own design.

 

The world may never agree,

But isn't that the beauty of it all?

I marched through fields of doubt,

And fought for something more than freedom,

More than words.

 

And now I turn,

And fall from the edge of sensibility,

Into the arms of uncertainty.

Strip me of my name, my credibility, and all else you wish...

It will not haunt me, for I've never been afraid.

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On January 20th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane "I lived for the dreams that lived w/ in me"~~Amazing line. This whole piece is one of my favorites. Great job all around!!
On January 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 That could be a song. i really really liked it
On November 14th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 I love it. It's amazing. The last line I agree. People will be quoting you. We'll be hearing it for I belive you could be a great poet. Though you already are. ~Vampyr~
On November 12th 2007 Babydotz Said :
Babydotz Love it wow very... I have no words for it!
On November 11th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 WOW you r an extremly passionate guy, Fantastic poem andeven ur "about me section" is fantastic love ur out look :)
On November 5th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang no regrets indeed.. great job!
On October 29th 2007 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
awesome!!
On October 28th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. It's so good. You painted such a vivid picture with your words. I love the last line "It will not haunt me, for I've never been afraid." Great job.
On October 27th 2007 alienz13 Said :
alienz13 i really like it
On October 27th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 wow it caught my attention i loved it
On October 27th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 wowww intense..i love the last lil paragraph..sry..idk what u call them..so i just say paragraphs..ummmm..hmm..i love it alot!! i was picturing everything u were saying too! and sometimes with certain poems i cant! so great job!!!:D