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Thoughts On A Nation

Views (122) Anger Created on 10-7-07 Flag

We fight for freedom,

Or so they say.

This elusive goal is the last thing on their mind.

Our leaders want blood,

An eye for an eye,

And it may be easier to look the other way,

But more lives have been lost in this war

Than the tragedy that sparked it.

Are we so blinded by propaganda

That we will never see the truth?

These billions of dollars they spend on this futile fight

Could instead feed our hungry,

And yes I speak from a starving stomach.

Stand up for your country if you will,

But I will take a stand for what is right.

And if the representatives of this fine nation

Wish to dig their own graves,

I'll be damned if they save me a spot.

 

If any good, god fearing, patriotic U.S. Citizens read this and were offended, fuck off. Your arguement is no better than mine, and neither brings a solution to the problem. So to all the flag waving yankee doodles stop worrying about the protestors and take a look at the death tolls. The government sends the future of america off to die, and who's to say we didn't lose the mind that would find ways to cure currently uncontrollable diseases, or the mind that would figure out how to stop global warming, all due to a fight we dont belong in. Far fetched, but that could very well be true. Marinate on that people

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On January 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 this is so true it isnt even funny. Most people dont want to speak up because they are cowards, and they think everything will be fine when they never will. loved the poem..sorry for ranting on.
On October 9th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 Wow I like it!! I agree fighting solves nothing, except maybe testosterone! sorry if that's spelled wrong but you get what I mean. g2g! ~Vampyr~
On October 8th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
my picture
i totally agree!!!
On October 7th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 woah..i totally agree with u 100%..i like how u expressed ur opinions about this topic..cuz some ppl are maybe afraid of speaking the truth cuz they dont wanna get bashed! nice workkk
On October 7th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. I've been trying to explain this to the kids in my class but they all think we should be over there... I'm like ummm NO.... Oppps I got sidetracked sorry. Anyways great job. I really do love it.
On October 7th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Awesome!