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Faces |
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What's Held Within This Night? |
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Rain |
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Distorting Perfection |
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Lonely Blue |
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Intoxicated Romance |
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Judgement |
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We |
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The Story Of Our Lives |
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Our Leaders |
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Death |
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Crimson Glow |
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A World Of Illusions |
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Coward |
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Thinking Of Love |
My World Is Black and White
I live for all these let downs,
My innocence is blown.
A victim of this crazy world,
Im never coming home.
You show me shades of lovely,
My world is black and white.
You stand up or get shot down,
Live a lie or fight.
My heart is a simple organ,
And my soul no more than emotion,
But my beliefs turn into dreams
That fuel a sick devotion.
You stand up for the past,
I long for needed change.
While you sit in the comfort of ignorance,
Im outside in the rain,
And I'll soak up every drop
Of the knowledge you ignore.
To get through it is believing..
I know what Im living for.
| On April 3rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Wow. I love this one. Seriously really good. Your wording is amazing here. Lovely |
| On February 15th 2008 jmh1011 Said : | |
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great poem!!! |
| On December 24th 2007 blondemoment22 Said : | |
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you are fantastic at rhyming and not letting it get completely corny. |
| On October 8th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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beautiful |
| On October 5th 2007 Uglynne Said : | |
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Kick. Ass. This is great. |
| On October 3rd 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. It's soo good. It flows so so well. I think this is my favorite right now. Then again I like all your work so far. |
| On October 3rd 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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Good wording. The heart being referred to as an organ is different... i know that sounds weird but that's the first time on this site i've seen it used that way. Good job!
~Vampyr~ |
| On October 3rd 2007 cheesyma Said : | |
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i love it |
| On October 3rd 2007 wchocolate07 Said : | |
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thats great:) |
| On October 3rd 2007 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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Awesome |
| On October 3rd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Awesome work! Great word choice and nice flow! I love it! |
| On October 3rd 2007 XtranquillityX Said : | |
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I love this! |
| On October 3rd 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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awesome |


