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For every1 who ever had a broken heartRate this Poem
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A Reason To Believe
Let me take you to a place
Where hearts are never broken.
The love is never tainted
When the lies are never spoken.
Temptation is always lurking
As long as one can feel,
But here there are no emotions
And nothing to conceal.
So if you'd like to escape
From the pressure and the pain,
Then embrace a quiet death
And you may never be wronged again.
...Or for those who know
That the memories are worth the tears,
Then step into reality
And grow stronger through the years.
Love will never be easy,
Nor will it be fair.
But we cant stop loving short of dying,
And I can promise no comfort there.
I say to keep pushing forward
With your heart upon your sleeve
And perhaps when you least expect it
You'll find a reason to believe.
| On March 12th 2008 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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crazzii how good it is.. i think im gunna read it like 4 more times=] |
| On November 29th 2007 JessLouns Said : | |
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i like it alot
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| On November 27th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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nice |
| On October 23rd 2007 castleprincess Said : | |
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!! |
| On October 3rd 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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AWWWW!!!! I LOVE IT!! you are a great poet. very inspiring and very sentamental. A great peice of work.
~Vampyr~ |
| On October 2nd 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow..this is one of my fav poems ive read on this site..WOW..nicely written!!!♥ |
| On October 1st 2007 AudumnRose Said : | |
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You did an amazing job on this... it makes people understand that suicide doesnt help anything it just makes it worse for the people you leave behind hehe yup lol so keep up the good work... |
| On September 30th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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omg i fucking luv this! U r really talented |
| On September 30th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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You really hit the nail on the head w/ this one. It's written very well and sounds great! |
| On September 30th 2007 wchocolate07 Said : | |
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amazing!!! :) |
| On September 30th 2007 MissenHim101 Said : | |
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i love it! it rocks i understand it too! |
| On September 29th 2007 4krissy Said : | |
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omg i love it! |
| On September 29th 2007 XtranquillityX Said : | |
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Awesome! |
| On September 29th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Beautiful! |
| On September 29th 2007 Deda33 Said : | |
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I UNDERSTAND EVERY WORD |
| On September 29th 2007 cheesyma Said : | |
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i love it |


