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Created on 9-2-07
I lit another smoke
And crawled into the bottle of memories
Where I let my anxiety go
And replaced it with too much hennessy.
Soon all my worries fade
As my mind is numbed by intoxicants
As the poison makes its way
Into my bloodstream once again.
When I fall asleep I never cry
Or stare at the ceiling for hours
As long as I stay drunk or high,
Ill be the first to admit that Im a coward.
Please Login to post comments| On January 11th 2008 LuvFaithHope Said : | |
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i feel this one |
| On November 27th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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honestly,this poem holds the potential to be much a much more potent literary piece. meaning- it flows and it pulls in a slow sinking way that every human being can relate to until you happen reach the word 'henessy', it shatters any chance for ambiguity, a chance to read many different things and evoke many different emotions from the same lines. it's good as is, but I do hope you take a look into what you could do if you step more into the abstract. you might just have a knack for it :) |
| On September 8th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like the thought of this one-the self exploration. It takes a lot to admit to certain things 'bout yourself... I thought you did a good job! |
| On September 2nd 2007 metzymutzy Said : | |
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Wow. Thats depressing. But good. I like it. |
