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Teetering on the brink of pleasure.....Rate this Poem
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Pleasure and Pain
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Created on 7-22-08
The look in your eyes make me quiver
A hint of wickedness with a tender glimmer
You press up against me as you tighten the knots
Lips brushing mine, hinting at the pleasures yet to come.
Warmly you kiss me, with such passion
I want to embrace you, but the ropes restrain
Tenderly you kiss me on the throat, a hicky forthcoming
Moving on down, kissing me all the way, finding a nipple.
Tender and warmly you tease, your kissing and liking pleases me
Playfully you nibble, pull and tantalize
With eye closed, what’s next to come, I visualize
Teetering on the brink of pleasure and pain.
Pain becomes the master as nibble turns bite!
Teeth sink in as the blood flows out.
Fighting the restraints, I SCREEM in agony
As the folk bird descend upon me
So the evening ritual begins again
To pay for the sins committed in time forgotten
As night turns to day and folk flies away
Leaving me torn and bloody, riding in agony
With joy in my eyes and the sun on my face
The father looks down and forgives my disgrace
Healing my wounds and drying my tears
Preparing me for the night to come.
Please Login to post comments| On July 29th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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sorry it took so long for me to read this... this is very well done. yes very sensual. and was it about vampires per se or just something demonic. her intimate encouter could be with i giant bed bug or leech! lol. but i really enjoyed this. |
| On July 24th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love the graphic detail-it makes for a very erotic. I loved the flow of your first 3 lines. It was flawless. After that the flow was a bit broken, but you made up for that minor detail w/ content! This was very pleasing to the senses. You did a great job for sure! |
| On July 23rd 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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very nice. descriptive. good underlying story. great job |
| On July 23rd 2008 ausjo Said : | |
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Haha. I see you return in your original form here. Nice work. |
| On July 22nd 2008 Jazie420 Said : | |
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Great |
| On July 22nd 2008 halfemoon Said : | |
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I like it. It's a bit graphic, sure, but beautifully written. |
| On July 22nd 2008 palmtrees16 Said : | |
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well written...it makes me ponder! |
| On July 22nd 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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it must be my work induced exaustion speaking... but it lost me at the folk bird... /= |
| On July 22nd 2008 DarkSide1477 Said : | |
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o kewl, dracula style... very deep and detailed |
| On July 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Wow that gave me goosebumps after awhile! Nice job! :) |
| On July 22nd 2008 browneyes33 Said : | |
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The imagery was great. As I am reading this, I am trying to figure out what you were feeling while writing this. The last three paragraphs take a huge turn. When I read this, I think lust and forgiveness but I would like to know what it means to you, if you want to share. |
| On July 22nd 2008 Poglu Said : | |
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I wasn't expectging the ending...nice, very nice...great job =D
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