mydragonlord

So cold and alone

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So Cold

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Created on 5-13-08

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I am so cold.

It is so dark in here

So cold and alone

There is no more light

None to warm my soul

So cold and alone

There is no more love

None to fill my heart

So cold and alone

There is no more life

None to fill the void

So cold and alone

There is no more you

None to be my world

So, cold and alone I will die.

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On July 31st 2008 hollistechik08 Said :

	wow this is sad. but deep. excellent five stars :)

On July 15th 2008 hpriestess Said :

	Maybe you need a fireplace & a great big lap cat, no? lol - well done.

On July 14th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :

	I think we all feel this way sometimes. Love you always!!

On July 14th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :

	I think we all feel this way sometimes. Love you always!!

On June 17th 2008 101091 Said :

	Sad, but well written. So powerful and emotional. Great job.

On June 12th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :

	I like the repetition...poems with repeating phrases just appeal to me...ahaa. But the way you chose your words here was nice. Me likes.

On May 26th 2008 perdylilpyro Said :

	it keeps to its form very well, but I think you might have done better if you hadn't gotten so structured on this one.

On May 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said :

	I think everyone knows how that feels. Wonderful poem though very emotional!