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pale |
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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On June 22nd 2008 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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very beautiful, sorry i haven't checked out your lovely poems lately but ive been sick, and had some family and friend issues. |
| On May 5th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Ahh, hindsight is 20/20, huh?!! But really, I enjoyed the poem. I thought the way you wrote it was unique and very smart. The repeated "have seen" and "have known" are very effective. Nicely done my friend!! |
| On April 29th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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wow so amazingly written, yet so sad. Great job |
| On April 26th 2008 thethreatIF Said : | |
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nice and dark. wow. and i like that you know how to use than and not then. haha. a lot of people have problems with that. |
| On April 26th 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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"I should have begged the clouds to remain." I love that line. |
| On April 26th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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oh my gosh! ur good I like the second verse the best! =D |
| On April 25th 2008 speederspider Said : | |
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I like it. I think it could flow a little better. I still think the message is great tho. |
| On April 24th 2008 JusthisM0nster Said : | |
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like this one, alot. |
| On April 24th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I really liked it alot! Very good job! :) |
| On April 23rd 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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YOU SHOULD OF KNOWN BETTER! |
| On April 23rd 2008 manda36274 Said : | |
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this is nice |
| On April 23rd 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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oh wow that is very powerful but exxxxtremely good! i loved it |
| On April 23rd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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nice..i really like it =] |
| On April 23rd 2008 Poglu Said : | |
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amazingly written...very deep and soulful BTW I don't really know what to write :P but i liked it ! |
| On April 23rd 2008 assumetheworst Said : | |
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i like it, its awsome and such but i dunno i feel weird about the title but i likey! :) |
| On April 23rd 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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OMG, this poem is so sad but i can so relate to it as i have not long just split up wid my Bf after 5 1/2 months being together and now i wish i hadn't of been so stupid believing in something called love |
