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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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I give up |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On April 17th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aw the ending is sad but i loved how you did this! |
| On April 17th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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its takes courage to have a story-telling experience in a poem. good job |
| On April 16th 2008 speederspider Said : | |
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haha! This is great! |
| On April 15th 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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it gives me the feel of an Epic until the very last quatrain... and believe me when i say that even graphting an Epic's FEEL is a feat in itself!
great job! although i would like to advise a little closer proofreading next time... =]
because you mixed seen and scene and lost an "L" in the word 'sheild'... but overall this is quite admirable |
| On April 15th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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wow great poem |
| On April 15th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This reads to me as a tribute to Firefighters. Perhaps even reminiscent of 9/11and all the firemen who lost their lives fighting the beast. I loved this! That may not have been your motivation but that it what I got out of it. Beautiful Fallon!!! |
| On April 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Oooh-very nice imagery w/ this one, and full of suspense as well. Great job-I definitely liked it!! |
| On April 14th 2008 thethreatIF Said : | |
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you always have the best imagery... awesome as uasual! |
| On April 14th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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kewl great poem |
| On April 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Excellent! I should read one of your storys. When I have more time. :) |
| On April 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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This is fantastic. Great job. |
| On April 14th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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Slashing, roaring spitting fire all-around!
My shied is melting my sword is drying out
Is this my final hour? Are my lights to go out?
With a last ROAR, I will my sword to flow.
i loved that part. this was one of my fav. |
| On April 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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so what happens to the lord's manservants and serfs? lol this is plenty good. |
