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Whisper my name.

Views (521) Love Created on 3-11-08 Flag

When you are all alone and scared

And you feel a warm breeze swirl about you

That was me covering you with my love

 

When you crossing a road deep in thought

And you hear your name called, stopping you

That was me calling you back, so the car would miss

 

When you are lost and need to get home

And you see a familiar lane where you have never been

That was me showing you the way, guiding you

 

When you pick up my photo frame, letting out a tear

And you smell my fragrance and feel a tender touch

That was me, reminding you, I will always be there.

 

When you are in need of me

And feel no one is there

Whisper my name, listen and believe!
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On April 16th 2008 stormdust Said :
stormdust That was a very touching poem....I love it. Great job.
On April 13th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Now this is poetry. Sometimes I spend so much time on this site, that I forget what it looks like. This is truely amazing. Please let me know when you have more.
On April 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth What a comforting poem for anyone who has lost someone. It gave me chills. Just wonderful!!!
On April 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch This is an amazing poem and so deep and heart felt! I really love it babes. It is so true aswell!
On April 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is very whell written! I can tell you really put alot into this!
On April 1st 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Very touching-beautiful writing!! I loved it~
On March 24th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex this is beautiful
On March 20th 2008 clapicusrein Said :
clapicusrein i love you for this poem ehe...
On March 20th 2008 clapicusrein Said :
clapicusrein i love you for this poem ^_^
On March 17th 2008 stormdust Said :
stormdust that was a very touching poem.... loved it
On March 16th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 i love this one beautiful
On March 14th 2008 kelkel234 Said :
kelkel234 beautifully written! My eyes teared up because it reminded me of my ex b/f. So beautiful. Srry I haven't commented u l8ly even tho u have commented me. I also jus wanted to say thanx for the comments. They mean alot to me. Keep up the brilliant work!!
On March 13th 2008 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot i love the part about the picture frame. amazing. but "When you crossing a road deep in thought" typo. hehe. =] just pointing it out, not that you can change it now, just letting you know that i actually read it. =] =]
On March 13th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster well, alright then....... *whispers* my dragon lord
On March 13th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said :
DarkSide1477 touching.. ne1 in particular this is written to?
On March 13th 2008 funchelsea Said :
funchelsea this is really good... i like it.
On March 13th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol I love this!!!!
On March 13th 2008 xoxrinbabesxox Said :
xoxrinbabesxox that is soo sweet
On March 12th 2008 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Great job! Definatly differnt from your usual but you did a great job! I loved it!
On March 12th 2008 California1516 Said :
California1516 omgggggg this was..wowwwwwww..amazingly written!!!
On March 12th 2008 coltaw Said :
coltaw Very nice. Looking after a loved one once you are gone. I like the sentiment
On March 12th 2008 Baiko Said :
Baiko Wow...That.. Made me...cry....ToT I don't like crying.....
On March 12th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 Wow. I love it. This is so good. You are so amazing at writing. Great job.
On March 11th 2008 seethrough3381 Said :
seethrough3381 Wow! I really like this. It's so deep and so true.
On March 11th 2008 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF That's how I feel God talks to us.... awesome!