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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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I give up |
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Gone But Always Beside You |
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A Rose in her hand(deppressing) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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LOST LOVE |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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My Lover's Touch |
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WHEN YOUR NEAR |
| On April 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I can see where ambersome's thinking of this being about reincarnation came from but I question if that was truly your intent. I thought it was well written and I enjoyed going on the journey through your life's pages. The ending, well I guess it's open for interpretation. :) |
| On April 2nd 2008 ambersome Said : | |
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i THINK IT'S P ABOUT REINCANATION, THE WOMANS LIFE IS OVER AND NOW SHE IS BEGINING ANEW. |
| On March 20th 2008 clapicusrein Said : | |
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happy birthday :P... |
| On March 18th 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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hehe, it's good =]
it reflects well the concepts that you're a well rounded person, understanding that all events of old as the tradgedies and the wonders are part of the life you have lived. but the question is, would you change anything? |
| On March 11th 2008 NisaNicole Said : | |
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I really love this. |
| On March 10th 2008 cjaskot Said : | |
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last line should be "is my" not "it my"...but someone probably already pointed that out...lol. very nice...i like it a lot. |
| On March 8th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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genius..and u are a great writer mr lord. lol. |
| On March 7th 2008 7unicornrings Said : | |
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btw happy late birthday lol |
| On March 7th 2008 7unicornrings Said : | |
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wow, i really like the first stanza ^_^ i love the way its put together and how it sounds. the whole poem is great tho! good work! |
| On March 6th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said : | |
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I like this one, very good! PS: amptones comment is funny! |
| On March 6th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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awesome |
| On March 5th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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I love it. |
| On March 5th 2008 Transience Said : | |
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I really like this.
Deep, emotional, pulling...
Very nice.
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| On March 5th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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This is nice. Filled with such emotion. A tear actually rolled down my cheek with the part about losing a friend. I know how that is. A did a really great job on this one. |
| On March 5th 2008 amptone Said : | |
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I like it and it flows very well. I won't admit when my birthday is, you are a better person than I! |
| On March 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This is very unique and nice! |
| On March 4th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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that is really cool how you did it. and happy birtday! (tho its late) =] |
| On March 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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I really like this one, happy birthday for yesterday and may all your hopes and wishes come true. Enjoy your new year. Love you always! |
| On March 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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LOL the one thing that everyone missed was that it was acually my Birthday when i wrote this. LOL |
| On March 4th 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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i luv it how you grasp the emotions of ur life, i wish every1 culd see it |
| On March 4th 2008 kellyjob Said : | |
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Great job! Loved it! Love the wording the most! |
| On March 3rd 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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beautiful!!! |
| On March 3rd 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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wow very nice I like it :) |
| On March 3rd 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Very nice. I love it. |
| On March 3rd 2008 RalRasper Said : | |
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Oh yeah this is freakin sweet dude |


