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On April 12th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is very creative! I love it!
On April 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I thought it was great! I felt your fear...not sure where numbbbboz was coming from.(???) You can't please everyone...haha...so I personally don't even try. You just keep doing what you do and I'll keep coming back for more. I like your style!
On March 12th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Deep Deep. [:
On March 7th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Fantastic write.
On March 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch This is awesome love, some pple just can't appreciatte a good thing when they see it, I think his name says it ALL!lol so ignore him as he is numb.
On March 2nd 2008 101091 Said :
101091 Well said. I love it.
On March 1st 2008 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings its really amazing!! ignore those stupid comments like the one of from numbbbb0z. they dont know a great poem when it hits them right in the face. ^_^
On February 29th 2008 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst awsome!!!! yay!!!! it vas awsome! :D :D
On February 29th 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess I may have to stop leaving comments what with your brilliant imagery & all, lol
On February 28th 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :
smlesarahsmile its good... if you like emo sounding things
On February 27th 2008 California1516 Said :
California1516 WOW..very well written..and intense
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Amazing! Very intense. I especially loved the second stanza.
On February 27th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i am half asleep reading this so i have nothing poignant to other than i enjoyed this read lol good job.
On February 26th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame numbbbb0z is numb ... I liked it.
On February 26th 2008 stormdust Said :
stormdust I like your poem.
On February 26th 2008 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Seems you're more concerned with rhyming than expressing your pain, man
On February 26th 2008 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z It's STALE. Boring! Say something new, man! Make it exciting. ARE YOU AFRAID OF FEAR?! I see no fear of fear here, man. It's boring. Stale. Something new. EXCITE ME WITH YOUR FEAR OF FEAR! CMon! THE DEMON SATAN IS COMING FOR YOU TO TAKE YOUR SOUL TO THE DEPTHS OF HELL FOR YOUR EXISTENCE TO CRASH AND BURN AND DIE AND WAIL AND SUFFER IN THE PITS OF A THOUSAND FIRES. What are you going to do? What are you going to do? You'll find your soul if it hasn't already LEFT YOU FOREVER. How do you feel withot your soul? How do you feel without your soul? 'cause I read these words man and I feel NOTHING. I feel no fear. SPEAK TO ME. SPEAK TO ME. SPEAK TO ME. You make it sound like your soul ain't shit, man. What's your soul worth? Speak to me. Tell us. Tell me. I want to see you crying in your fear of never finding your soul again, man! C'mon!
On February 26th 2008 LesbotwinPOCWL Said :
LesbotwinPOCWL I like it a lot! Sometimes I find myself feelings this way...
On February 26th 2008 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot =] nice
On February 26th 2008 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF awesome! i hope to grace you soon with another of mine.
On February 26th 2008 FamousOne777 Said :
FamousOne777 awesome
On February 26th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao u know i dont know which is better the poem or the fact that i have a thunderstorm as a backdrop for it wait thunder computer oh this is a bad idea great poem
On February 26th 2008 Bexi93 Said :
Bexi93 jESUS CHRIST, THT WAS AWESOME, IT'S WORDED SO WELL I COULD PICTURE EVERYTHING YOU WERE SAYING AND HEY YOU ARE DEFFINATLY NO SOULLESS BEAST CUS YOU WRITE SO BEAUITFULLY
On February 26th 2008 chickp96 Said :
chickp96 whoa.
On February 26th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said :
Jumpy1811 great imagery, i love it!