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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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I give up |
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Gone But Always Beside You |
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A Rose in her hand(deppressing) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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LOST LOVE |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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My Lover's Touch |
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WHEN YOUR NEAR |
| On April 12th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Wow I love the questioning in the end. You have a unique imagination! Good work! :) |
| On April 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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"Wondering in the mist of my own darkness" was my favorite line and I noticed you used it in your comments as well. This whole poem for me revolved around that line. That self created darkness that can keep us lost. Very well done! Grab that key and be free!!! :) |
| On February 26th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I loved this-you painted a grand picture w/ your words. It was funny, I actually was picturing a room w/ serveral bright colored doors w/ big black locks as I was reading. Wonderful job! |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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very well written |
| On February 25th 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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As always you write brilliantly. I should think you'd have given Poe quite the run for his money! |
| On February 25th 2008 thethreatIF Said : | |
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I Love It! |
| On February 24th 2008 kelleyrey Said : | |
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WOW! This is great, one of the best that I have read in a while.. good job :) sorry I haven't put out anythng new yet I'm having a writer's block again.. it's cool it happends from time to time hopefully I'll have something up by this week. I'll let you know :) |
| On February 21st 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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gahhhh rhyme... lol imagery is a good friend [= |
| On February 21st 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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oh my gosh! that's deep... =) |
| On February 20th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said : | |
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I just love your writing :) And this was very deep! |
| On February 20th 2008 cjaskot Said : | |
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i like it a lot =] |
| On February 20th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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it's so beautifully written, great job |
| On February 20th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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very deep. i liked it |
| On February 20th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Very well painted.I could see it. |
| On February 20th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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hi all sorry about the two typo's "your" |
| On February 19th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Very, very well written...Very unique...Amazing work!..I don't know what else to say.. |
| On February 19th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said : | |
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very good writing! |
| On February 19th 2008 browneyes33 Said : | |
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This was very good, Great imagery. I could just see it unfold. I am impressed, Not that I am a poet but I am a great reader :) |
| On February 19th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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My Dragon Lord, that was extravagant. |
| On February 19th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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this was great!!!!! |
| On February 19th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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this was really great and deep! loved it |
| On February 19th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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It was...interesting. I liked it. It's uncoventional and that's a really good thing. Amazing job :] |
| On February 19th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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i like it..very deep :) |


