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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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I give up |
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Gone But Always Beside You |
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A Rose in her hand(deppressing) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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LOST LOVE |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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My Lover's Touch |
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WHEN YOUR NEAR |
| On February 12th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said : | |
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Shit.. that's pretty deep |
| On February 12th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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wow! this is very nice! i hope someone came in time...=[ |
| On February 8th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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if only i read this sooner...dragon witch told me some of the issue. and i wish i could do something.. |
| On February 7th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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OMG GREAT JOB!!! |
| On February 7th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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nice. will you check out my work. |
| On February 6th 2008 thethreatIF Said : | |
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that's good. nice cry out of emotions! |
| On February 6th 2008 Pooh455 Said : | |
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great job. check mine? |
| On February 6th 2008 ellies15 Said : | |
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good jobililke it :) |
| On February 5th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. I love it. It says so much in so few words. I understand the feeling all to well. You did a great job capturing the frustration of the feeling by asking the questions. Great job. |
| On February 5th 2008 amptone Said : | |
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Very nice work! |
| On February 5th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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i like it:) nice work! |
| On February 5th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Intense..I can relate...Anyway, I love it! |
| On February 5th 2008 Gigglez200969 Said : | |
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love it this is how i am filling right now!Good job! |
| On February 5th 2008 kellyjob Said : | |
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Wow! Very unusual! Love your writing style! I think I've felt like that quite a few times....Good poem! |
| On February 5th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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Brilliant. |
| On February 5th 2008 cjaskot Said : | |
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like it =] |
| On February 5th 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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You definitely captured anxiety in this one. It's nice that it ended the way it did too |
| On February 5th 2008 ILuvNeoma Said : | |
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Very good! Very emotional... :D |
| On February 5th 2008 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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awesome work bro |
| On February 5th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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I like the way it builds. Very good work. |
| On February 5th 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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it is nice [=
but i feel it is not as emotional as people before me seem to think... it's good, but it doesnt speak to me /=
still nice job |
| On February 5th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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lol, pfft, comments. nice poem |
| On February 5th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Very nice love, we will always be there to rescue one another, we promised remember? But Ifully understand and like all things it will pass. Love you always! Nix. |
| On February 5th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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I don't think anyone is broken beyond repair, just need to believe in you... great job. |
| On February 5th 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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very deep and the emotions are running through this poem non stop, it great and just 2 let u know i would save u. |


