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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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I give up |
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Gone But Always Beside You |
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A Rose in her hand(deppressing) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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LOST LOVE |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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My Lover's Touch |
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WHEN YOUR NEAR |
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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On March 11th 2008 Xaynos Said : | |
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Gave me the shivers...beautiful. |
| On February 26th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I really like this one-I like the tender emotions you have in it. It truly is hard to lose someone that you love so much, but I love how you put that loss into words~ |
| On January 15th 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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Much better! You know I think you have great talent |
| On January 14th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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love it. simple yet stunning. great job |
| On January 6th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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Oh I'm sorry. Well it's a great poem, hope you're alright. |
| On January 5th 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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such emotion and yet gentle, u really get ur point across |
| On January 5th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Very good. I'm speechless. |
| On January 5th 2008 kellyjob Said : | |
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Very sad! Very goog tribute though! Best way to remember a loved one. Very well writen! And to the point. Hope all is better! Good poem!! |
| On January 5th 2008 ILuvNeoma Said : | |
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Aw, thats sweet. Sorry to hear tho... my most deepest regards. Its nice you wrote a poem about her. |
| On January 4th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aww sorry for your loss. well written tho |
| On January 4th 2008 reapersheart Said : | |
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i really liked it, and sorry for your loss |
| On January 4th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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another great writing mr lord.lol |
| On January 4th 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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awww dis is sad and touchin
its real good tho |
| On January 4th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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This is great! Really emotional, but gentle. |
| On January 4th 2008 Dctalkgirl1990 Said : | |
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love it |
| On January 4th 2008 7countrygirl7 Said : | |
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Short and sweet! I really liked this one! You sure have a talent for this! *smiles* |
| On January 4th 2008 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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Sad but Gripping. Honestly thought it was rain at first to tell you the truth lol |
| On January 4th 2008 hottiesmnth25 Said : | |
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that is beatuifl i love it |
| On January 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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we will miss the person we once new but be glad that she suffers no more. If you listen you will hear she is still with you and in your heart always my love. Just her arms are missing to engulf you.But you are still loved and we will hold you always. May her journey be great! Blessed be nana
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| On January 4th 2008 amptone Said : | |
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Sweet and gentle yet bold and turning cold. |
