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My Beautiful Guiding light
HERE I STAND ALONE AGAIN
IT SEEM NOT SO LONG AGO
YOU CAME, LIFTING MY PAIN
MAKING ME WHOLE,
KEEPING ME SANE.
MY HAND FLEXES, AS IF TO REACH FOR YOURS
ONLY TO FIND, YOU ARE THERE NO MORE
MY HEART RIPS ANEW, AT THE THOUGHT OF
YOU
I CAN NOT HOLD BACK THESE TEARS THAT POUR
WHY DID MY HEART NEED TO BACK ONCE MORE
HERE I STAND ALONE IN THE ROOM
WHERE YOU ONCE ROAMED
CAREFULLY I LISTEN FOR YOU
SHURLY I CAN HEAR YOUR VOICE
SO SWEET, SO SOFT, SO PURE
MY ARMS MISS YOUR FORM
I HUGG MYSELF JUST TO REMIND ME
OF HOW ONCE YOU FORFILLED ME
YOU WHERE MY CHILD, OF ME YOU HAD NEED
NOW YOU ARE GONE, YOUR SOUL FREED
HERE I STAND ALONE AGAIN
FINALY YOU FEEL NO PAIN
I KNOW YOU ARE FREE
NEVER AGAIN IN MY SIGHT
BUT I KNOW YOU THERE,
MY BEAUTIFUL GIUDING LIGHT| On January 25th 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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I finally made it to this one - well done mate |
| On December 11th 2007 coltaw Said : | |
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I like this alot. It has such a touch on sincerity to it. You can feel the deep loss that the narrator is going through. The word choice paints a clear picture as well. Great job |
| On December 9th 2007 LuraJane Said : | |
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sweet heart thats really good comnent me when you write more poems |
| On December 7th 2007 caraschroth Said : | |
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wow...that is really good!! |
| On December 7th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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that was so beautiful. I am breathless, it so emotional. Keep up the great work. |
| On December 6th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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aww i understand...*tear* i really did cry reading this to be honest. it reminds me of my brother. but it was deffinately a great poem! keep it up! =D |
| On December 6th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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indeed this is good. |
| On December 6th 2007 choreymcdumb Said : | |
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Very sad and touching... |
| On December 6th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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WOWWWWWWW this is amazing..great writing skilz..and wow! |
| On December 6th 2007 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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Beautiful |
| On December 6th 2007 MrKeesee Said : | |
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This is beautiful man. I love the flow, it's really touching. |
| On December 6th 2007 MrKeesee Said : | |
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This is beautiful man. I love the flow, it's really touching. |
| On December 6th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Very sad, yet beautifully written. Good job. |
| On December 6th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. I love it. It's beyond amazing and has left me speachless. |
| On December 6th 2007 Tengu1992 Said : | |
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This is really good poem and I...I dont know what to really say |
| On December 6th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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wow really enjoyed this =] |
| On December 6th 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said : | |
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i am at a loss of words on this one i really enjoyed it an it was beautiful |
| On December 6th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Ouch but I really do understand. they always speak. |


