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My Beautiful Guiding light

Views (352) Pain Created on 12-6-07 Flag

HERE I STAND ALONE AGAIN

 

IT SEEM NOT SO LONG AGO

 

YOU CAME, LIFTING MY PAIN

 

MAKING ME WHOLE,

 

KEEPING ME SANE.

  

MY HAND FLEXES, AS IF TO REACH FOR YOURS

 

ONLY TO FIND, YOU ARE THERE NO MORE

 

MY HEART RIPS ANEW, AT THE THOUGHT OF

YOU

 

I CAN NOT HOLD BACK THESE TEARS THAT POUR

 

WHY DID MY HEART NEED TO BACK ONCE MORE

  

HERE I STAND ALONE IN THE ROOM

 

WHERE YOU ONCE ROAMED

 

CAREFULLY I LISTEN FOR YOU

 

SHURLY I CAN HEAR YOUR VOICE

 

SO SWEET, SO SOFT, SO PURE

  

MY ARMS MISS YOUR FORM

 

I HUGG MYSELF JUST TO REMIND ME

 

OF HOW ONCE YOU FORFILLED ME

 

YOU WHERE MY CHILD, OF ME YOU HAD NEED

 

NOW YOU ARE GONE, YOUR SOUL FREED

  

HERE I STAND ALONE AGAIN

 

FINALY YOU FEEL NO PAIN

 

I KNOW YOU ARE FREE

 

NEVER AGAIN IN MY SIGHT

 

BUT I KNOW YOU THERE,

 MY BEAUTIFUL GIUDING LIGHT
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On January 25th 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess I finally made it to this one - well done mate
On December 11th 2007 coltaw Said :
coltaw I like this alot. It has such a touch on sincerity to it. You can feel the deep loss that the narrator is going through. The word choice paints a clear picture as well. Great job
On December 9th 2007 LuraJane Said :
LuraJane sweet heart thats really good comnent me when you write more poems
On December 7th 2007 caraschroth Said :
caraschroth wow...that is really good!!
On December 7th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 that was so beautiful. I am breathless, it so emotional. Keep up the great work.
On December 6th 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings aww i understand...*tear* i really did cry reading this to be honest. it reminds me of my brother. but it was deffinately a great poem! keep it up! =D
On December 6th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 indeed this is good.
On December 6th 2007 choreymcdumb Said :
choreymcdumb Very sad and touching...
On December 6th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 WOWWWWWWW this is amazing..great writing skilz..and wow!
On December 6th 2007 Halfpint9135 Said :
Halfpint9135 Beautiful
On December 6th 2007 MrKeesee Said :
MrKeesee This is beautiful man. I love the flow, it's really touching.
On December 6th 2007 MrKeesee Said :
MrKeesee This is beautiful man. I love the flow, it's really touching.
On December 6th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Very sad, yet beautifully written. Good job.
On December 6th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Wow. I love it. It's beyond amazing and has left me speachless.
On December 6th 2007 Tengu1992 Said :
Tengu1992 This is really good poem and I...I dont know what to really say
On December 6th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 wow really enjoyed this =]
On December 6th 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said :
hottiesmnth25 i am at a loss of words on this one i really enjoyed it an it was beautiful
On December 6th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch Ouch but I really do understand. they always speak.