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On September 8th 2008 xXxRikuxXx Said :
xXxRikuxXx wow... 0_0
On July 31st 2008 hollistechik08 Said :
hollistechik08 wow is all i can say!
On February 27th 2008 LesbotwinPOCWL Said :
LesbotwinPOCWL Wow! Kinda how I feel to a point right now in my life. I love it!
On December 9th 2007 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF it's good!
On December 5th 2007 500nets Said :
500nets i really like the use of commentary at the end in the quotes, it gives the poem life
On December 5th 2007 coltaw Said :
coltaw AWESOME. I love it. Conspicous untill the revealing and satisfying end. Keep it up.
On December 4th 2007 MrKeesee Said :
MrKeesee This is good, and Thugnastay is right, at the end you almost have to go back to beginning and read it again. I love it!
On December 4th 2007 lipglossrox12 Said :
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i absolutly love this poem so much emotion. its aewsome!!!!!!
On December 4th 2007 blkxbutterfly Said :
blkxbutterfly That was good! Really good! :)
On December 4th 2007 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro very unique, lots of twists and a sudden drop. very potent and very powerful.
On December 4th 2007 Aleera00 Said :
Aleera00 This is really good.
On December 4th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 WOW. Amazing as usual. This is very well done. I love it
On December 4th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch Hey babes great work, art of concealing the truth to lift the veil at the end, Very Well Done.
On December 4th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 wow this is really good. great job
On December 3rd 2007 LuraJane Said :
LuraJane WOW I FELT LIKE I WAS THERE HOW CREEPY!!!!!!!!!!
On December 3rd 2007 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Wow, that poem gave me the chills! Nice job!
On December 3rd 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 WOAHHHHHH i love it!!!
On December 3rd 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic This is amazing!
On December 3rd 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Definitely spine tingling. Nice work Mr F. ;)
On December 3rd 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 that sent shivers down my spine. It was really beautiful. I know that one definetly came from the heart.
On December 3rd 2007 LoveLiszey Said :
LoveLiszey wow. i like this alot....
On December 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i read it and am thinking hey this is rather good..then i got to the end and had to re-read it to fully absorb what has happening between the lines and then i said this is RATHER GOOOOD lol. love this.
On December 3rd 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said :
hottiesmnth25 oh i love this there's strong emotion an this is what i would have like to write on the last one but i guess i don't have it in me to write as good as this yet but this one is great i really do love it
On December 3rd 2007 Jumpy1811 Said :
Jumpy1811 i really like this there's strong emotion.