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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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I give up |
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Gone But Always Beside You |
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A Rose in her hand(deppressing) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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LOST LOVE |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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My Lover's Touch |
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WHEN YOUR NEAR |
| On November 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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i like this a lot |
| On November 29th 2007 jacobpie Said : | |
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that was awesome i like the way you talk of the warmth within you. you should check out my poems i need some constructive criticsm; and ill keep checking yours |
| On November 28th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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i like it alot..kinda reminds me of a poem i did that involved chains and such..nice work :D |
| On November 28th 2007 Tengu1992 Said : | |
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This is good |
| On November 28th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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well written..great job |
| On November 28th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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i love it. I really do, it really makes me open my eyes about so many people over here in Kansas. Very Beautiful. |
| On November 28th 2007 coltaw Said : | |
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Well written. I like the last stanza, I recieved a very vivid mental image from it. Very good. |
| On November 28th 2007 kellyjob Said : | |
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Wow! Very good poem! Very sad though but I like it! |
| On November 27th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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very well written. |
| On November 27th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Great work! Especially love the first line! |
| On November 27th 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said : | |
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this is how i feel all the time people are always holding me down from my hopes an my dreams an i want to break free but how can i that is the million dollar question |
| On November 27th 2007 7countrygirl7 Said : | |
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WoW! This is gr8! I can really relate to this one! *thumbs up* |
| On November 27th 2007 ellies15 Said : | |
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i love it |
| On November 27th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Great poem. Very emotive. Lovely job. |
| On November 27th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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I so agree my love, that's why we clean house.
Really well done , i like it. |
| On November 27th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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this is the way they can make you feel. all they do is "gime gime gime" and when they have "levme levme levme" |


