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Anger, Pain, Sorrow & Death

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Never let the blanket of anger,

 

Cover your eyes from the world around

 

Never let it creep into your soul

 

It will dig in & create a deep hole

  

 

From the deep hole with in,

 

All your pain will begin,

 

Festering, chipping away the soul

 

Braking the cords that make you whole.

  

 

The strings of your being shall whither.

 

Making you old and bitter

 

Creating with in you, sorrow

 

Making you fear to face tomorrow

   

With Anger you will find,

 

All your Pain will be inside

 

And only sorrow you will find

 

Then Death you won’t mind

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On December 7th 2007 jacobpie Said :
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that was awesome very well written and thought out
On November 6th 2007 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess I don't wholey agree because of 1 situation. Outside of that I love it. The promotion of such poise is admirable
On November 4th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch We have seen enough incredible people wither like that. I never want to be like that. Nicely put love.
On November 4th 2007 reapersheart Said :
reapersheart i loves it :D
On November 4th 2007 FamousOne777 Said :
FamousOne777 ausjo put it perfectly. Good work.
On November 4th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Too true. Anger chokes the owner of the emotion rather than the one who made us feel it. It's just not worth holding on to. Nice poem.