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I need motivation!

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Bored (Newest Poem)

Views (207) Pain Created on 7-28-08 Flag

         

Not sure if anyone will like this. I know I have written better tell me what you think. It’s a little different!

            Bored

Feeling like a wound up watch. As time slowly ticks by.

I sit there dumbfounded and start to sigh.

I have minutes to hours to do something.

I have no motivation So I’m bound to do nothing.

But sit here bored and alone.

With so many things to do but it is unknown.

 

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On September 19th 2008 breepers Said :
breepers Hey this is awesome,i can relate to it alot ;) good work!
On August 20th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 lol... something I can relate to! :) great job, Lizzy! :)
On August 3rd 2008 TheKTGirl Said :
TheKTGirl The rhyming scheme is a little iffy but it's cute :D
On August 3rd 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth good stuff.
On August 1st 2008 Dannibabe94 Said :
Dannibabe94 great poem! and yes I would like to be friends!
On July 31st 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Yeah... I get it. A very short poem that managed to say a lot about your frame of mind
On July 31st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I love it :)
I can relate to this poem!
On July 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x hey it's awesome and I get writer's block all the time. Hope it'll go away soon
On July 29th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei Wow. Writer's block again? *hugs* Hope everything gets better.
On July 29th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Very different from your before work...still good...lovely poem
On July 28th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 I totally understand about the motivation. I have been needing it for A Thirst For Blood, but thanks to Max he sent me a song that fits PERFECTLY with my story. Except the fact that in the song its a girl. lol but other then that it is totally Romeo! So that has given me a little more umph to write although I am really busy with my re-write. But I'll try to do another chapter too! Great job with the poem although I will agree its not your best, but eh, you were bore so....so what! :D
On July 28th 2008 max5892 Said :
max5892 omg i can so relate to this! lol...great job :)
On July 28th 2008 CharTheKnight Said :
CharTheKnight Haha yeah, I can definitely relate. Great poem. :D
On July 28th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 this is good and so true boredom sucks=(
On July 28th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord this is so cool!
On July 28th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet a poem everyone can relate to lol...if only boredom didn't exist...this is a good poem though
On July 28th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Definitely familiar withthat feeling, you are correct though, not one of your best, but it gets the feeling across, that's all that matters, hehe, good job