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Uninspired(Newest Poem)
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Created on 6-12-08
Uninspired
Drained from all inpiration.
My mind is full of the frustraton.
What else do you want me to say?
The lines are being filled anyaway.
My pen sits there in anticipation.
When should I pick up the pen to begin.
When should I put it back down again?
You beg me to write something.
I gaze off just to find nothing.
What is this place but a dream land?
Where artist join and hold your hand.
Drained from all inspiration.
This is now my presentation.
Please Login to post comments| On August 20th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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Great job, Lizzy! This is great! keep writing! :) |
| On July 16th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Love it :) |
| On July 3rd 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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ugh!!! WRITERS BLOCK!!!!! i hate this feeling or when you thought you had a whole 20 chapter story idea and you stop in the middle of chapter 1 because you are not "inspired" to write any more!! i con totally relate!!! that's why most of my stories are 1 chapter. hehehee =] |
| On June 24th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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i think all writers (including myself) can relate to this!!! sometimes i hit a serious slump and i can't get a good poem out for two weeks!! |
| On June 24th 2008 max5892 Said : | |
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oo nice..yaay for another not love poem! lol..good job |
| On June 19th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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I love the rhythm.. anyone who calls themselves a writer knows this feeling and is in constant battle with it.. :) great job! |
| On June 17th 2008 breepers Said : | |
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it's different,but i really liked it!keep it up girl! |
| On June 15th 2008 petersonsv Said : | |
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you have such a big fan base if i could just get people to look at my stuff i would love that I love your poems by the way they make me feel like someone else out there feel like i do way to express yourself loves it : ) |
| On June 14th 2008 kittybombshell Said : | |
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Damn...that's a pretty good (uninspired) poem! |
| On June 14th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said : | |
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Hella Bomb. |
| On June 13th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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Dude I wish I could be this creative when I'm uninspired *cross eyed* |
| On June 13th 2008 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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I like it alot!! Very original and just simply great haha. Though it may not be your best I really like it! |
| On June 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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what else can i say. i like it ofcourse lol |
| On June 13th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I've felt like this before-way too many times!! Anyhow, it was catchy w/ the way you rhymed it. I personally like the last line "this is now my presentation"----It turned out well :) |
| On June 12th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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Its different...made me think sort of...I liked. =] |
| On June 12th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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wow sweetness. I like |
| On June 12th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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nicely done |
| On June 12th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Know about this TOO well, haha, yes very well worded |
| On June 12th 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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Very nice ^_^ |
| On June 12th 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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sweey girli!!!!that's amazing! |
| On June 12th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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i've done something like this before...i wrote a song about writers block lol. you're right, it wasnt your best but it was original |
| On June 12th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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i love it very good |
| On June 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Man I wish I would have thought of that in one of my writer's block moments! Write about what you can't write about! lol |
| On June 12th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love this one alot!! It's creative~ and well worded~ I just love it :) |
