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Int. 0002-02-0000002 (Newest Poem)

Views (130) Worry Created on 5-31-08 Flag

                            This my remixed version to my poem "Institutionalized."

            Int. 0002-02-0000002

Institutionalized for being in gang ties.

 

Institutionalized as they sit there and antigonize.

 

Institutionalized I killed no one just heard deaths cries.

 

Institutionalized for deceit and lies.

 

Institutionalized as I'm left to there demise.

 

Institutionalized no one cares till someone dies.
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On August 20th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 Amazing. You're a wonderful writer, Liz. :)
On June 24th 2008 max5892 Said :
max5892 nice...good remix...
On June 19th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone itz grrrrrrrrrrrreat like tony the tiger would say...lol...grrrrrrrrrrrrreat work.
On June 13th 2008 drummajorpod Said :
drummajorpod I like how both the first words and the ending words of each line rhyme. Very nice!
On June 8th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Wow
On June 5th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said :
teeniegirl015 I like this one better. It's very unique, really different, and well-written.
On June 5th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 I like how you wrote it. Had it rhyme with the first word instead of the end words. Really great job. And the words are so powerful! :D
On June 4th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei Nice ^_^
On June 3rd 2008 petersonsv Said :
petersonsv I like it it's good: )
On June 1st 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i like it.
On June 1st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I really love the style of this. It's really good. Amazingly captured :)
On May 31st 2008 angelalone Said :
angelalone i like this one a lot. ...no oone cares till someone dies... relates a lot to my life. thumbs up.
On May 31st 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x cool it's awesome
On May 31st 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet short yet amazing
On May 31st 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 I like this one...but the first version was better. IDK it had better flow...I cant explain it.
On May 31st 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 I like that, very true that last line. It's all fun and games till someone loses a life, haha, Awesome Job!!
On May 31st 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Tell me what you think. I had trouble with it like the first version.