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Institutionalized (Newest Poem)
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Created on 5-9-08
I wrote this at work I was staring out the window. Looking out at the gloomy weather.
Institutionalized
Institutionalized for my crimes.
Institutionalized for deceit and lies.
Institutionalized I killed no one just heard deaths cries.
Institutionalized no one cares till someone dies.
Please Login to post comments| On August 20th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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Great job. Love it :) |
| On June 23rd 2008 max5892 Said : | |
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its good...maybe im just dense (which is probably the case) but i think i might have gotten a bit lost somewhere...so..yea..but i like it..good job |
| On June 15th 2008 petersonsv Said : | |
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its pretty good nice :) |
| On June 8th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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Cool; I think I like the remix better though :) great job on both! |
| On June 1st 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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this is rather interesting...u have rather unique poems. cool. |
| On May 31st 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Loved it. It's short, sweet, and to the point! |
| On May 30th 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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awesome!!!!!!!!! |
| On May 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I can see how you'd feel caged at work :) I love this. It says alot of things. Nice job |
| On May 12th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Nice really nice! short and to the point |
| On May 10th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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what are we workin'a 12 pack of bush?... this is great work... I think if you smoked some weed you'd be inspired... hell... the wall would be inspiration in your life for that moment till the high faded...lol...Look all the women bug me to post comments on their poetry and I do...they just don't know if I'm serious once I've done so...for instants ashley tells me thank you..."I think"...lol...keep up the good work...and I'll keep up the bottle till it's empty...till next time take care of yourself and your pencil and paper...much love will |
| On May 9th 2008 RealFiction616 Said : | |
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I like it, it could be longer cuz I like it so much I just want it to go on forever. |
| On May 9th 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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very many things I could say, but everything is wonderful so I shouldn't use extra words to explain why :-) |
| On May 9th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Wow! This is very nice! I can relate to this one... Great work! :) |
| On May 9th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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oh wow that's marvelous! |
| On May 9th 2008 ultimatebadger Said : | |
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I likes it it's nice yod did well |
| On May 9th 2008 Dustman99 Said : | |
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I like it, original topic for this site. Well done |
| On May 9th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I had a hard time with the middle and end. Tell me what you think. |
