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Revenge
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Created on 2-27-08
This Poem is about my sister and her disorder. Maybe some of you can relate to this. Maybe you have bipolar or have a love one that has it. It is something that is hard to cope with. Espically growing up with her having that.
Revenge
I want to get revenge on bipolar today.
I wish I could not upset her in anyway.
If I do I know the conquences to.
A one way ticket for the hospital for you.
Don't get mad don't get mean.
Yet all I can do is settle in between.
Any action from me so suddenly.
Could end up in you speaking negitivly.
In the battle it's hard to agree.
Who is winning good or evil what will today be?
What side will I see?
In a second it will change again.
Her thoughts are racing and are ready back to begin.
I want to get revenge on bipolar today.
Take away the black cloud that wants to stay.
Please Login to post comments| On June 21st 2008 max5892 Said : | |
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aww touching...i dont really have much experience with bi-polar but i almost feel like i know whats its like... |
| On March 20th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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I can really relate to this.
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I like it!
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| On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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I like this..I'm bipolar and I know what you're going through with your sister...nice job. |
| On March 13th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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wow *thumbs up* |
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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but over all very good poem Lizzy! |
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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people think that I'm bi-polar but like sixties doll I suffer from ptsd and depression |
| On February 27th 2008 kimandsean Said : | |
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i can relate to it my son is bipolar. |
| On February 27th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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~RealFiction616~ Your actually not the first person who said that! It's is a newer poem for me maybe I should do a rewrite? |
| On February 27th 2008 RealFiction616 Said : | |
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I think this poem has lots of potential. I think that it would've been better hadn't you been so literal |
| On February 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I haven't been diagnosed with anything. except pstd and an eating disorder~ which is alot of issues in it's own. I still wonder though~ |
| On February 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love this~ I have similiar ways with my sister. Although I'm not bi-polar~ maybe Borderline though. |
