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drunk driver

Views (93) Tragedy Created on 12-10-06 Flag

i'm lying on the pavement

blood is all around

all i saw were headlights

and then i hit the ground

the pain has grown intence

and the people stop and stare

theres one man in the middle

who doesnt seem to care

i didnt do the drinking

but im the one to pay

me, i'll probably die

in this puddle where i lay

he may get to walk

with no punishment at all

he has down the drinks

 and let me take the fall.

the cops just stand around. 

 they say theres nothing they can do

they have called my mom

they said i'll never make it through

i wonder if he'll realize now

that lifes a priceless joy

does he even understand

that alchols no tay

when he sobers up

will he remember what hes done

or does he do this all the time

and think that it is fun

i have unfinished business

and things id like to say

but i always took for granted

that id live another day

things are growing dimmer

and i hurt so bad inside

how many more will have to suffer

after i have died?

i hope you understand

all these things i say to you

and to those of youwhodrink and drive

i never made it through

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On August 28th 2007 tinashine8 Said :
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This really hits home with me.I was a victim of a drunk driver and needless to say he got away with it.I never got a chance to tell him how he messed up my life
On May 28th 2007 beautifultiff Said :
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That is deep very beautiful i feel ur words i was a victim of a drunk driver the man that hit me was 3 times the limit how i dont know i never seen the mans face tell a yr later in court cause the night of the accdent he was gone befor i woke up he left me and my best friend to die and thankfully we didnt we where hit oncomeing on a high way going 60 mph how we lived im not shur but i know not meany people get the chance to say how lucky they are to be alive with only a broken neck and a few scares
On March 6th 2007 prefect118 Said :
prefect118 this is really touching to me because my dad was a victim of a drunk driver who happened to be underage at the time... i know its wrong but i hate her... she ruined my life and i hope she realizes what she did to my family that night she decided to drive home drunk from the stripping club she worked at. thank you for spreading the message!
On December 13th 2006 PatriciaP1979 Said :
PatriciaP1979 That was very deep. I really like the messages that you try to send to people.