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drunk driver |
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rape of the world |
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The Gift |
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drunk driver
i'm lying on the pavement
blood is all around
all i saw were headlights
and then i hit the ground
the pain has grown intence
and the people stop and stare
theres one man in the middle
who doesnt seem to care
i didnt do the drinking
but im the one to pay
me, i'll probably die
in this puddle where i lay
he may get to walk
with no punishment at all
he has down the drinks
and let me take the fall.
the cops just stand around.
they say theres nothing they can do
they have called my mom
they said i'll never make it through
i wonder if he'll realize now
that lifes a priceless joy
does he even understand
that alchols no tay
when he sobers up
will he remember what hes done
or does he do this all the time
and think that it is fun
i have unfinished business
and things id like to say
but i always took for granted
that id live another day
things are growing dimmer
and i hurt so bad inside
how many more will have to suffer
after i have died?
i hope you understand
all these things i say to you
and to those of youwhodrink and drive
i never made it through
| On August 28th 2007 tinashine8 Said : | |
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This really hits home with me.I was a victim of a drunk driver and needless to say he got away with it.I never got a chance to tell him how he messed up my life |
| On May 28th 2007 beautifultiff Said : | |
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That is deep very beautiful i feel ur words i was a victim of a drunk driver the man that hit me was 3 times the limit how i dont know i never seen the mans face tell a yr later in court cause the night of the accdent he was gone befor i woke up he left me and my best friend to die and thankfully we didnt we where hit oncomeing on a high way going 60 mph how we lived im not shur but i know not meany people get the chance to say how lucky they are to be alive with only a broken neck and a few scares |
| On March 6th 2007 prefect118 Said : | |
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this is really touching to me because my dad was a victim of a drunk driver who happened to be underage at the time... i know its wrong but i hate her... she ruined my life and i hope she realizes what she did to my family that night she decided to drive home drunk from the stripping club she worked at. thank you for spreading the message! |
| On December 13th 2006 PatriciaP1979 Said : | |
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That was very deep. I really like the messages that you try to send to people. |


