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Created on 5-15-07
I hear the waves crashing against the shore. Pelicans squaking, Laughs and screams of girls and boys of all agaes fill the air People swimming in the wonderful water. Splashes of water fall against the people. Young adults lying on beach towels trying to get a bronzing tan. Little kids sitting in sand making sand castles and moats. Life Guard sitting high upon his chair keeping the beach safe
Please Login to post comments| On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I like it very well written :) |
| On October 4th 2007 kgrf101 Said : | |
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Now I'm really at the beach!:)lol |
| On August 31st 2007 wolfvalentine Said : | |
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i like it. nicely detailed |
| On August 23rd 2007 NicoleSmith159 Said : | |
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I like it. Kinda felt like I was there. It was described well. |
