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i love him more then he knows.Rate this Poem
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the worst storm of all |
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abusive |
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the ride of my life |
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she wants you. |
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a little prayer. |
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the girl who had to die. |
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those damed temptations |
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carpe diem |
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the way i feel |
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the park. |
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This moment
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Created on 7-11-08
i'm looking in your eyes
and can't seem to look away
this concentrated gaze
there is something it seems to say
and then our lips meet
as if they were always meant to touch
don't even need to say i love you
'cause i can feel it so much
my entire body starts to tingle
as your tounge touches mine
everything feels so right
everything feels so fine
then our bodys' get closer
in a firmilliar warm embrace
in this moment i feel safe
there's no more demons left to face
just laying there with you
i could do it everyday
your body's comfy against mine
as you hold me and we lay
then for the icing to this moment
some cheesy banter you speak
then you call me a cherry
and you kiss me on the cheek
for every hour we're apart
i'm still thinking of you
missing you like crazy
oh what love can make us do
i've never had it better
right now don't think i ever will
a love like ours is precious
the kind that just makes time stop still
2008-07-11
05:55:24
Please Login to post comments| On July 20th 2008 MizzKierra14 Said : | |
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great poem |
| On July 18th 2008 yourfaceisgay1 Said : | |
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babe, i dont even know what words i could say about this that tells you how i feel everytime i read it. I Love You So Much. |
| On July 11th 2008 punkgurl83 Said : | |
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its realy cool its just like me |
| On July 11th 2008 summagirl15 Said : | |
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This is a really good poem!! you write really well, keep it up! (just to let you know, familiar is not spelt firmilliar...:)..) i really liked your poem |
