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a poem about some boy i know lolRate this Poem
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the worst storm of all |
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abusive |
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the ride of my life |
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she wants you. |
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a little prayer. |
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the girl who had to die. |
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laughter. |
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accomplishments |
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a dozen roses. |
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those damed temptations |
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carpe diem |
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all smiles. |
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the way i feel |
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the park. |
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I want. |
butterflies
butterflies are swirling
deep in a pit
a pit in my stoamch
my heart is lit
i see your face
and i loose my mind
the butterflies are swirling
its because of you i find
when you call me georgeous
my smiles tend to stay
and when you tell me how you feel
they never go away
my heart beats twice as fast
almost to emergency state
come hurry to my rescue
the butterflies will not wait
they flap their wings
as if its a race a race that never ends
their rushing in a drastic state
alarms to my heart is what it sends
the feelings that the butterflies
wont stop flapping for
are those tingly heart skipping ones
you've opened my heart through it's metal door
these undescribable feelings
that we cant figure out
and we cant describe their meaning
are the ones we cant live without
i more then just really like you too
you make the day worth while
and when you said that was your secret
im sorry i didnt smile
but loves a scary word to me
it makes my stoamch turn
i never wanted to say it again
since the last time my heart burned
but now that im with you
and i see just how we feel
the only word thats right for this
is love, i know its real
| On June 25th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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Butterflies indeed...That's very sweet! I like that it's so innocent with the idea of 'risk-all'. Very nice! |
| On June 20th 2008 yourfaceisgay1 Said : | |
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awww, i like it babe :)(L)
i love you |


