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the worst storm of all |
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abusive |
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the ride of my life |
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she wants you. |
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a little prayer. |
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the girl who had to die. |
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laughter. |
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accomplishments |
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a dozen roses. |
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those damed temptations |
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carpe diem |
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all smiles. |
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the way i feel |
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the park. |
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The white dove.
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Created on 5-13-08
alone in the corner, you
cut
cut
cut.
shouting in the mirror, you
slut
slut
slut.
barfing in the toilet
gag
gag
gag.
screaming at your mother
fag
fag
fag.
infront the world, you
cry
cry
cry.
you say to yourself
die
die
die.
your only friend, he
begs
begs
begs.
for you to hold on, he
says
says
says.
cause one day you'll be
free
free
free.
and you wont hurt anymore
please
please
please.
not good at listening, you
bleed
bleed
bleed.
as your demise starts planting
seed
seed
seed.
you try to get help, that you
need
need
need.
for your horrible addiction, that you
lead
lead
lead.
but its too late for that, so you
choke
choke
choke.
and hell why not, so you
smoke
smoke
smoke.
and then eventually you go, and you
pass
pass
pass.
and then he cries as he burries, you in the
grass
grass
grass.
he never said it before, that for you he felt
love
love
love.
as he lays you to rest, he sees a white
dove
dove
dove.
Please Login to post comments| On June 30th 2008 kalagreenday Said : | |
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good. |
| On May 24th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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very heavy poem...so sad..great job. |
| On May 14th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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i love it. amazing. great job. |
