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2-25-08Rate this Poem
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y i shouldnt hide |
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ANYTHING |
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It hurts |
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Sooner or later |
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DRIFT |
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more than jus a dream |
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THE LETTER THAT WAS LEFT UNREAD |
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like a drug |
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my greatest gift in life |
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WHY?......:( |
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MY REGRET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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move on... |
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I HATE U FOR THIS!!! |
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*SHE TELLS ME* |
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AWAY FROM REALITY
I KEEP TELLING MYSELF HOW MUCH I NEED YOU,I ADMIRE EVERYTHING THAT YOU DO
I LOVE THE WAY YOU SMILE,I LOVE THE WAY YOU TAKE ME AWAY FROM REALITY FOR A WHILE
YOU TAKE ME TO A BEAUTIFUL BLUE STREAM, I BEND DOWN AND SLOWLY RUN MY FINGERS THROUGH THE WATER IT FEELS LIKE A DREAM
I DANCE INSIDE THE WARM WATER AND WE BEGIN TO PLAY,BUT BEFORE WE HAD TO MUCH FUN THE SKY QUICKLY TURNED GREY
I LOOKED AT YOU WITH MY EYES FULL OF WORRIES,BUT YOU JUST TAKE MY HAND AND SAID "WE HAVE TO HURRY"
I THEN STOP AND ASK YOU WHAT THAT WAS ABOUT,YOU QUICKLY SHOOT A GLANCE AT ME AND STARTED TO SHOUT
YOUR EYES WERE COMPLETELY BLACK,YOU SHOUT "YOU CAN NEVER GO BACK"
YOUR NECK AND BODY WAS THEN DRIPPING IN BLOOD AND SO WAS I,I STARTED TO PANIC I STARTED TO CRY
I REALIZED OUR LITTLE LOVELY STREAM WE WERE AT TURNED IN TO BLOOD,IT QUICKLY STARTED TO OVER FLOOD
I ASKED YOU WHAT IT WAS ABOUT ONCE AGAIN,BUT YOU LOOKED AT ME WITH THOSE BLACK EYES AGAIN AND SAID "YOU HAVE COMMITTED A SIN"
YOU JUMPED ON ME A SLIT MY THROAT AND STABBED MY HEART,THATS WHEN WE FELL APART.
IM ONE OF YOU NOW,CANT YOU HEAR MY GROWL
IM TAKING A NEW PERSON IN OUR LITTLE WORLD TONITE,DONT ASK ME WHO DONT ASK ME IF ITS RITE
I DONT HAVE A MIND OF MY OWN ANYMORE,YOU MADE ME BELIEVE YOU LOVED ME YOU MADE ME FEEL SORE
BY:STEPH
| On February 23rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is amazing~ I love your choice of wording, and how at first It's enchanting, then it turns darker. Reaaly good poem~ |


