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y i shouldnt hide |
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ANYTHING |
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It hurts |
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Sooner or later |
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DRIFT |
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more than jus a dream |
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THE LETTER THAT WAS LEFT UNREAD |
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like a drug |
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my greatest gift in life |
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WHY?......:( |
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move on... |
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*SHE TELLS ME* |
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Created on 11-29-07
under the stars i lay,i close my eyes and my mind jus floats away
i feel the need to be serious,my questions leave me curious
my lips are chapped and my throat feels dry,my eyes feel heavy im about to cry
the nite feels cold,your not here with me so i have no1 to hold
thats jus it tho......hun ut never around,the answer to my quetions is wat i jus found
you need to move on and so do i,jus sayin that makes me wana die
after the final answer comes up the nite flies bye,time went so fast and i need to no why
i need more time to think about wat is about to go on,everythn in my life is outa place and is soo wrong
im sorry hun,my confusion has jus begun
you need to move on and so do i
im so sorry but for me ur not the rite guy
BY:STEPHANIE
Please Login to post comments| On February 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is really good writing~ and I don't know why no one's commented it yet. I like your way with words. You write really pretty. And the poem has a lot of meaning also~ |
