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Silent Enchantment
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Created on 1-20-08
A ray of light slips through my blinds and lays on her face
Gently stroking her soft skin and remains in that embrace
Tranquillity fills the air, taking me to a place unknown
I go steadily on this journey, somewhere I have never gone
Silence overwhelms me, my mind in an unconscious bliss
Mesmerized by her beauty, my wretched soul it puts to ease
Spell bound I can not move, although I may never try
Lost in this moment, in this instance I can dare to fly
Like precious jewels in winter slow, her cheeks on my pillow
The illumination of light in the dark, her hair begins to glow
Like ribs protect the heart, under the covers her body rests
The finish work of an artist, a masterpiece she creates
Locked in this enchantment, thoughts are my only voice
I struggle to be released, then realize I have no choice
In panic my heart bangs, begging, pleading to be free
Confused by the emotions that suddenly surged in me
But enchanted I remain, eyes on her skin, white as a dove
Listening to the melody of her breath, unaware this could be love
Gently stroking her soft skin and remains in that embrace
Tranquillity fills the air, taking me to a place unknown
I go steadily on this journey, somewhere I have never gone
Silence overwhelms me, my mind in an unconscious bliss
Mesmerized by her beauty, my wretched soul it puts to ease
Spell bound I can not move, although I may never try
Lost in this moment, in this instance I can dare to fly
Like precious jewels in winter slow, her cheeks on my pillow
The illumination of light in the dark, her hair begins to glow
Like ribs protect the heart, under the covers her body rests
The finish work of an artist, a masterpiece she creates
Locked in this enchantment, thoughts are my only voice
I struggle to be released, then realize I have no choice
In panic my heart bangs, begging, pleading to be free
Confused by the emotions that suddenly surged in me
But enchanted I remain, eyes on her skin, white as a dove
Listening to the melody of her breath, unaware this could be love
Please Login to post comments| On February 13th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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this was really good..great work : ) |
| On January 20th 2008 tkotapout Said : | |
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that was so good.its got that happily confused and content feeling. |
| On January 20th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This poem is good. I like the calm, sweet air that floats around it. Nice job~ |
