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Created on 9-1-07
why is life like this?why do we go day by day acting like every thing is ok when its not?why cant we just express our feelings with out being juded?is this why the world is this way?i cant under stand why when you try your hardest and its still not good enought.and why do have to be judged by age just because someone is younger doesnt mean their any less than you.is this why the world is this way?we go by day by day with somthing eating at us on our insides and when you try to cover it up it makes it worse.peole kill them slef so they dont have to deal with any more pain.is this why the world is this way? the reasonthe world is this way is because we man kind are monsters we are to blame for why the world is this way admit it to your self you are the monster we all are.
Please Login to post comments| On July 17th 2008 Dae99 Said : | |
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if that isnt true idk wat is |
| On October 8th 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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Like this! It's very true!! |
| On September 3rd 2007 wolfvalentine Said : | |
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damn that is too tru |
| On September 2nd 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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true very true but that is how it is so one day we are going to destroy ourselfs and the earth (kiner like my poem "the truth" read it and see what you think |
| On September 2nd 2007 october1015 Said : | |
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I like it! |
| On September 1st 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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I got the point you were trying to get across ;) |
| On September 1st 2007 Burnley14 Said : | |
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I like it!! |
| On September 1st 2007 Jizzlenator Said : | |
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I think it's really awesome. I can really relate. |
| On September 1st 2007 mewmewgirl12 Said : | |
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thanx! |
| On September 1st 2007 leeshaforeverr Said : | |
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the only real problem i see are the spelling errors. other than that i LOVE it! its realllly good, you're a great writer |
| On September 1st 2007 mewmewgirl12 Said : | |
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i hope u lik it! |
