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Left to Die |
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worthless |
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What he did 2 me... |
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Closing |
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Regrets. |
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My Best Friend. |
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Just Listen. |
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Regrets.
In life you should have no regrets,
you feel what you feel,
you love who you love,
and you deny what you deny.
you cant change your feelings,
so have no doubts.
otherwise you'll just feel left out.
and who wants to be left standing in the rain?
when you could come out of all the sorrow and pain,
and live your life with all there is to gain.
| On December 28th 2007 babygirlbri321 Said : | |
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its pretty good but just one thing :in the biginning you didnt rhyme and at the end you did.it would sound better to me if you either made it rhyme or not.but its great other than that!i love the meaning behind it. |


