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When I was in love with my best friend

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Created: 03/25 2008
Views: 143
Category: Love

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To The Guy

To The Guy

To the guy who makes me smile everytime I see him,

To the guy who makes the butterflies in my stomache flutter to where I can't breathe.

To the guy whos very presence sends shivers down my back,

To the guy who's in my dreams at night.

To the guy who's in my thoughts the second I wake up,

I think I love you.

 

To the guy who makes me cry at night because I can't see him,

To the guy who is cute even when I'm mad at the world.

To the guy who makes me laugh every day,

To the guy who makes me blush at everything I do.

To the guy my friends think I'm obsessed with,

I think I love you.

 

To the guy I look forward to seeing every day at school,

To the guy who doesn't try,but succeeds in making me happy.

To the guy I lose my train of thought to,

To the guy I find myself starring at way too often.

To the guy who possibly doesn't know I like him,

I know I love you. 

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On September 10th 2008 StaticXManiac Said: 
StaticXManiac eh forget what that last person said lol i think its great lol its your poetry you do what u want it comes from your heart and mind and ppl need to accept your art and style good job ^.^
On July 4th 2008 TheKTGirl Said: 
TheKTGirl It's really cute; I like it. No, I really REALLY like it :) just a suggestion; repeating "to the guy" that often makes you a lil' tired of the line. Maybe if you tried something like "To the guy I look forward to seeing every day at school" "Who doesn't try, but succeeds in making me happy"... etc. Hopefully this helps a bit :)
On March 29th 2008 kesaia1029 Said: 
kesaia1029 thats so adorable,I really enjoyed reading this.
On March 27th 2008 snakerulz Said: 
snakerulz holy crapomoli.....that is totally my type of poem i can relate to
On March 25th 2008 fawzia11 Said: 
fawzia11 It's a cute poem! And a lot of people can relate to this. I know I can
On March 25th 2008 kidsayuki Said: 
kidsayuki i think its cute, i like it.
On March 25th 2008 hpriestess Said: 
hpriestess "Time waits for no one" -- Tell him if you still feel that way!