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Casket

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It's dark and wet, I feel the cold breeze pass right by me. I feel the presence of death waiting.

I stand up and feel the walls that are surrounded all around me, it feels as if a hallway.

I hear the sound of water dripping from the walls, and the whistling from the breeze.

I walk a little further as my hands slide across the walls, not seeing anything, hoping I won't fall.

This place feels corrupt and destroyed in every way. It feels like i've been walking forever, there's no way I can still be here.

Suddenly I see a dull red light at the end of this tunnel, and I hear the popping sound of flames.

I finally get to the end and I look around the corner, there sat a casket on a table in an octagon shaped room with torches in every corner.

I kept my back up against the wall, in horror of what I was seeing. The casket was open but could not see any body.

I walk a little closer, but suddenly heard a scream and I felt like I was being watched, and so I looked around to see.

No sign of any presence  could be seen in the room, but I looked back at the casket and my own reflection grew.

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On March 26th 2008 Blueeyedgirl92 Said :
Blueeyedgirl92 Thats really good.
On March 19th 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover LOVE IT!
On March 2nd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Wow!!! Your talented! Again The visual is vivid!
On February 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I LOVED this~ It was amazingly written! *snaps* to you:)
On February 26th 2008 xxMCRxROXxx Said :
xxMCRxROXxx Fuck you are good=) You make me so jealous. You really have a nack fr this kind of stuff.
On February 24th 2008 professormcgee Said :
professormcgee OMG OS AWESOME ure so fuckin good at creating a visual effect, i love it!!! u better write n publish poems someday baby