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06/01 2008
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Black Curtains
I found in you a counterpart
I saw in your eyes understanding
The ways of the wind explained
In perfect detail to my eyes
As the soul extension of your hair
Oh the only black curtains id welcome
Crashing down around me
Smooth to the touch just as
Flexible as powerful
Entangling like knots in my heart
Around my fingers
I’ve seen agile wind
Felt unseen force
But nothing like the way it
Makes your hair dance
Please Login to post comments| On October 12th 2009 oneTinSoldier Said: |
| super sexy |
| On August 6th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
| This is sexy |
| On March 6th 2009 servantofall36 Said: |
| Such great imagery! |
| On October 7th 2008 JessicaKasza Said: |
| adorably dark |
| On August 7th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
| i like this one it reminds me of a windy day for some reason but i like how it flows together nice work! |
| On July 25th 2008 speederspider Said: |
| wow this is really amazing. Nice poem Marcus:) |
| On July 4th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| the only thing I can think of, (And it sounds cheesy) but AWWW, very good, this is a simple lovely thing, not too embellished, you let the true beauty stand out and that was your subject. splendid.~L |
| On June 3rd 2008 500nets Said: |
| the only black curtains id welcome
Crashing down around me
best line
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| On June 3rd 2008 500nets Said: |
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| very romantic, not cheesy but genuine, i'd have loved a poem like this written about me, i hope the recipient read it |
| On June 2nd 2008 amptone Said: |
| I'm glad you did post it. It's very detailed, dark and sensual.. Bravo Marcus! |
