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The Wish list |
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I dream of a World |
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Do you know? |
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The Tradgey of my Life |
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You and I. |
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My Big Brother |
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Goodbye |
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Do I still love him? |
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The little black box |
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Innocent Little Girl |
My Big Brother
My Brother,a sweet , amazing and talented boy he was.
A great man he would have been.
He left almost 5 years now.
It seems like forever ago
I can remember the day i was told
That he was not coming home
He was in a wreck on his way to school
It was our other brother and him
You see at 35 miles a hour
He was not suppose to die
Maybe a few injuries but not Death
It was a little accident.
He was suppose to live
But his truck was faulty
The company made it wrong
The glass broke, when it was not suppose to
And then his head hit the concrete
And it was over after that
And when I heard the news
That was the end of my life as I once knew it
Now a piece of Me is gone and I have began new
And I will always remember him
His smile , His face , His laugh!
And I will never forget those things
I WILL NEVER FORGET HIM.
In loving Memory of Christopher Adam Betts.
Died OCTOBER 23 ,2003.
I will always love you Big Brother.
And I will never forget.
| On March 28th 2008 pip1392 Said : | |
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i like it.im really sorry. i know how it feels |
| On January 16th 2008 emohairlove Said : | |
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I really like this. It brought tears to my eyes. My brother has been gone for a little over 2 years. And it seems like forver ago also. But it alsos seems that just yesterday he was giving me a hug and he left to go to work and i went to go camping. Also, my brother to died from his head hittign the concrete and losing to much blood. He was on his way home from work that night with some friends luckily his friends both lived also. He was falling alseep as he ran into the mailbox. He overcorrected and flied the car 3 times. hitting his head because the car had t-tops.It has never been the same nor will it ever be the same again. Ever since he left me it has changed my life enormously and I have done things I would have never done if he was still here helping me. |


