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Created on 1-20-08
slashing the wrists of the pain i hate to bear
knowing it's my fault it's even there
excuse me, i know it's rude to stare
i didn't mean to give you a scare
but would you hate me if i love that you're there?
faking every word but i can't fake the feeling
if only it were love that's causing you to be kneeling
you're getting much better; my defenses are peeling
but it's not only to me, those smiles you've been dealing
and you still haven't noticed i can't lose the feeling
and next time
(assuming there'll be one)
i'll remember to forget
everything you make me regret
and next time
(how i hope there'll be one)
i'll remember to forget
things i still can't help but regret
my clumsy lips speak "i hate you"
i hope you know i mean "i've always loved you"
listen to the words my heart yearns to speak to you
but i could never; i falter in front of you
i need you to know that nothing i say is true
whisper to the past, those things that slip away
i know someday my silence will make me pay
i open my mouth to tell you to stay
all that happens is me walking away
babe i can't handle how you make me so afraid
and next time
(promise me there'll be one)
i'll remember to forget
everything i hate to regret
and next time
(i'll make sure there is one)
i'll remember to forget
things i'm pretending to regret
sugar, it's next time
(i'm glad there was one)
now i'll never forget
it wasn't you who made me regret
sweetie, it's next time
(i told you there'd be one)
now i couldn't ever forget
you were never something to regret
knowing it's my fault it's even there
excuse me, i know it's rude to stare
i didn't mean to give you a scare
but would you hate me if i love that you're there?
faking every word but i can't fake the feeling
if only it were love that's causing you to be kneeling
you're getting much better; my defenses are peeling
but it's not only to me, those smiles you've been dealing
and you still haven't noticed i can't lose the feeling
and next time
(assuming there'll be one)
i'll remember to forget
everything you make me regret
and next time
(how i hope there'll be one)
i'll remember to forget
things i still can't help but regret
my clumsy lips speak "i hate you"
i hope you know i mean "i've always loved you"
listen to the words my heart yearns to speak to you
but i could never; i falter in front of you
i need you to know that nothing i say is true
whisper to the past, those things that slip away
i know someday my silence will make me pay
i open my mouth to tell you to stay
all that happens is me walking away
babe i can't handle how you make me so afraid
and next time
(promise me there'll be one)
i'll remember to forget
everything i hate to regret
and next time
(i'll make sure there is one)
i'll remember to forget
things i'm pretending to regret
sugar, it's next time
(i'm glad there was one)
now i'll never forget
it wasn't you who made me regret
sweetie, it's next time
(i told you there'd be one)
now i couldn't ever forget
you were never something to regret
Please Login to post comments| On January 20th 2008 tkotapout Said : | |
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that was so powerful.i loved it.especially how you used the paretheses.like someone was whispering while it was said. |
| On January 20th 2008 m3gG1e9o0 Said : | |
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real title: I Regret Everything (Except The Way You Made Me Feel) That Day.... the whole point is that you can read it with or without the part is parentheses.. get it?? |
