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Created:
07/20 2007
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188
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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17
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Broken Heart |
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10
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Drunkin Driver |
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11
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Friends |
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13
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Im done |
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2
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Him... |
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2
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Does he see? |
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1
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not always |
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2
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Disaster angel |
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2
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Goodbye... |
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0
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for him |
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There's always a part.. |
Im done
as i lay awake thinking...
my mind starts to trail off...
my head just starts sinking...
as im thinking...
i start to wonder why...
why do we sit there and wait till that one guy says he forgives u?...
why do we wait for that guy to say he misses u?...
i dont know why..
but i start to think if im that person who sits there and waits for that guy...
im through waiting
im through with him
im done feeling like everyday im fading away..
im gettin a move on with my life
Please Login to post comments| On January 31st 2008 listen147 Said: |
| great self-declaration! awesome! don't you just love writing poems where you DO get to move on and not linger. great job! |
| On October 31st 2007 countryfreak13 Said: |
| great work!!:) |
| On July 23rd 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| true,,, sooo damn true,, but then,, u don't want to be stuck as the person having to make others wait too,,, urgh,,,, this is a great poem,, very intellectual,,, profound in it's own way,,,,,,,,,, i like it,, i stand by it,,, nice work!~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On July 21st 2007 jessicawieberg Said: |
| Very Goood. |
| On July 21st 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| I love it. |
| On July 21st 2007 mrskritter Said: |
| nice work |
