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Created: 06/29 2007
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Category: Pain

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Drunkin Driver

I went to a party mom,

I remembered wat u said.

U told me not to drink mom,

So I drank soda instead.

I really felt proud inside mom

The way u said I would

I didn’t drink and drive mom

Even though the others said I should

I know I did the right thing mom

I know u r always right

Now the party is finally ending mom

As everyone is driving out of sight

As I got into my car mom

I knew id get home in one piece

Cause of the way u raised me

So responsible and sweet

 

I started to drive away mom

But as I pulled out into the road

The other car didn’t c me mom

And hit me like a load

As I lay there on the pavement mom

I hear the policemen say

The other guy is drunk mom

And now im the one who will pay

 

Im lying here dying mom…….

I wish youd get here soon

How could this happen to me mom

My life just burst like a balloon

There is blood all around me mom

I hear the medic say mom

Ill die in a short time

 

I just wanted to tell u mom

I swear I didn’t drink

It was the others mom

The others didn’t think

He was probably at the same party as I

The only difference is he drank

And I will die

 

Why do ppl drink mom

It can ruin ur whole life

Im feeling sharp pains now

Pains just like a knife

The guy who hit me is walking mom

And I don’t think its fair

Im lying here dying

And all he can do is stare

 

Tell my bro not to cry mom

Tell daddy to be brave

And wen I go to heaven mom

Put daddy’s girl on my grave

Sumone should have told him mom

Not to drink and drive

If only they had told him mom

I would still be alive

 

My breath is getting shorter mom

Im becoming very scared

Please don’t cry for me mom

Wen I needed u

U were always there

I have on last question mom

Before I say good bye

I didn’t drink and drive

So y am I the one to die?

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On July 31st 2007 angeleyes62580 Said: 
angeleyes62580 wow that is so good but yet so sad!! Good Job
On July 9th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang awwwwwwwww,,, it is indeed sad,, and true,,, very profound thru and thru,,, the imagery u captured in words and ur own thoughts really came out very well,, and the whole, ,"mom",, after each few lines made it very clear,, tho,, at one point i got annoyed of ur using it too much,, but then,, it's more like a note to ur mom,,, very good descriptions,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On July 7th 2007 jessicawieberg Said: 
jessicawieberg This is so sad.
On June 29th 2007 mrskritter Said: 
mrskritter very sad but true nice work
On June 29th 2007 amberelaine445 Said: 
amberelaine445 awww.. that so sad!! love it though! ~amber elaine~