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Drunkin Driver
I went to a party mom,
I remembered wat u said.
U told me not to drink mom,
So I drank soda instead.
I really felt proud inside mom
The way u said I would
I didn’t drink and drive mom
Even though the others said I should
I know I did the right thing mom
I know u r always right
Now the party is finally ending mom
As everyone is driving out of sight
As I got into my car mom
I knew id get home in one piece
Cause of the way u raised me
So responsible and sweet
I started to drive away mom
But as I pulled out into the road
The other car didn’t c me mom
And hit me like a load
As I lay there on the pavement mom
I hear the policemen say
The other guy is drunk mom
And now im the one who will pay
Im lying here dying mom…….
I wish youd get here soon
How could this happen to me mom
My life just burst like a balloon
There is blood all around me mom
I hear the medic say mom
Ill die in a short time
I just wanted to tell u mom
I swear I didn’t drink
It was the others mom
The others didn’t think
He was probably at the same party as I
The only difference is he drank
And I will die
Why do ppl drink mom
It can ruin ur whole life
Im feeling sharp pains now
Pains just like a knife
The guy who hit me is walking mom
And I don’t think its fair
Im lying here dying
And all he can do is stare
Tell my bro not to cry mom
Tell daddy to be brave
And wen I go to heaven mom
Put daddy’s girl on my grave
Sumone should have told him mom
Not to drink and drive
If only they had told him mom
I would still be alive
My breath is getting shorter mom
Im becoming very scared
Please don’t cry for me mom
Wen I needed u
U were always there
I have on last question mom
Before I say good bye
I didn’t drink and drive
So y am I the one to die?
| On July 31st 2007 angeleyes62580 Said: |
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| wow that is so good but yet so sad!! Good Job |
| On July 9th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| On July 7th 2007 jessicawieberg Said: |
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| This is so sad. |
| On June 29th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
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| very sad but true nice work |
| On June 29th 2007 amberelaine445 Said: |
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| awww.. that so sad!!
love it though!
~amber elaine~ |


