Created By
Author's Comments
Stated out about shoes..Rate this Poem
My Poems
+6
|
+
12
|
Gone and not returing |
|
+
8
|
Not Speaking, Just thinking |
|
+
7
|
till the end |
|
+
9
|
Screaming blood |
|
+
11
|
flooding my mind |
|
+
10
|
Never Again |
Screaming blood
Views (98)
Created on 7-8-07
Tathered, torn, beaten up.
A bleeding soul of paper.
Someone you love is gone.
Moving away into the stars.
Burning bright, cannot be seen.
Falling back to save your dream.
No one listens to hear your cries..
Screaming blood, though broken eyes.
Please Login to post comments| On September 6th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
|
luv the ending, great poem. |
| On August 28th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
|
Shoes??? I agree with Javelle-this poem kinda had a mind of it's own. I love the way it turned out. My favorite line is a bleeding soul of paper. Did that really have anything to do with shoes?? But really I liked it:) |
| On August 27th 2007 twilight023 Said : | |
|
wow this is great! keep up the good work. |
| On August 22nd 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
|
i really do like your poems |
| On July 8th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
|
Well written! It seems yor poem took on a life of its own. Instead of shoes it seems that it is abaout a broken and bleeding heart. |
