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Life
Mad says the holes in the wall
Just a teenager says the pictures of her friends on the desk
Sad says the stains on her pillow
Broken heart says the torn up pictures in the trashcan
Confused about life says the slits on her wrist and blood stains in the sink
No chance at life says the abusive parents
She is no longer with us says the suicide note on the bed and the window open
| On August 27th 2008 Cassieslaunch Said : | |
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wow that is really good, reminds me of the bad old days
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| On August 19th 2008 ForgetMeNotSky Said : | |
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wow. That was really good. It reminds me of one of a close friend of mine and myself...luckly there was always someone willing to catch us. Be it ourselves or just somebody. We're working with eachother on it... |
| On August 15th 2008 SasobiUchiha Said : | |
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That is really deep, but it's good. It's so sad how often this is true... Anyway, you have great talent. |
| On July 7th 2008 bballstud1090 Said : | |
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Why? that is all I can think. |
| On June 20th 2008 hypnotizer Said : | |
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this is amazing nice work! check out mine please |
| On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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amazing!look @ mine |
| On June 5th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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i agree with deathbat67 because it is just like my life...nice poem...kmp |
| On May 18th 2008 freakwhair Said : | |
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great poem
vary deep, like scars |
| On May 18th 2008 stephaguilar21 Said : | |
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this poem is the truth in a sdad depressin way!!!\
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| On April 16th 2008 bearcub690 Said : | |
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this is very good, i liked it |
| On April 8th 2008 dancingidiot Said : | |
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It's very good.
And to that dude down there. STFU, this was a good poem. |
| On April 8th 2008 Kirstinbabe301 Said : | |
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Wow thats deep! I love it! |
| On April 5th 2008 corbin92295 Said : | |
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sad and deep...i loved it |
| On March 25th 2008 tashc92 Said : | |
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wow! this is deep & sad
i lovee it |
| On March 9th 2008 jessisakura16 Said : | |
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Really amazing. Reminds me of some of my thoughts sometimes... |
| On March 9th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said : | |
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That's excellent, it describes every teenager that no one cares about. good job |
| On March 5th 2008 LoveAngel12 Said : | |
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4 GET ALL DA HATERS DAT WAS GUD LOVE IT |
| On March 2nd 2008 smlesarahsmile Said : | |
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freaken lame. why is everyone wanting to kill themselfs nowadays? just take in like everyone else. dont encourage things lke this
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| On February 26th 2008 LesbotwinPOCWL Said : | |
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I like it, it actually brang back the pain I used to feel and still partially do. Great job! :) |
| On February 25th 2008 SugarBunny331 Said : | |
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this is sad but excellent |
| On February 25th 2008 XxpreppyemoxX Said : | |
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that's sad. |
| On February 24th 2008 deathbat67 Said : | |
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wow this pretty much describes every dpressed teenager whose experienced a broken heart, who has parents that don't listen, and friends who aren't there when they need them... good job, i really like it:] |
| On February 19th 2008 a106 Said : | |
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THAT WAS LIKE THE BEST PEOM EVR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On February 19th 2008 a106 Said : | |
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THAT WAS LIKE THE BEST PEOM EVR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 |
| On February 18th 2008 ash101457 Said : | |
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wow i am speeches |


