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Views (14838) Anger Created on 7-4-06 Flag

Mad says the holes in the wall

Just a teenager says the pictures of her friends on the desk

Sad says the stains on her pillow

Broken heart says the torn up pictures in the trashcan

Confused about life says the slits on her wrist and blood stains in the sink

No chance at life says the abusive parents 

She is no longer with us says the suicide note on the bed and the window open

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On August 27th 2008 Cassieslaunch Said :
Cassieslaunch wow that is really good, reminds me of the bad old days
On August 19th 2008 ForgetMeNotSky Said :
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wow. That was really good. It reminds me of one of a close friend of mine and myself...luckly there was always someone willing to catch us. Be it ourselves or just somebody. We're working with eachother on it...
On August 15th 2008 SasobiUchiha Said :
SasobiUchiha That is really deep, but it's good. It's so sad how often this is true... Anyway, you have great talent.
On July 7th 2008 bballstud1090 Said :
bballstud1090 Why? that is all I can think.
On June 20th 2008 hypnotizer Said :
hypnotizer this is amazing nice work! check out mine please
On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs amazing!look @ mine
On June 5th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh i agree with deathbat67 because it is just like my life...nice poem...kmp
On May 18th 2008 freakwhair Said :
freakwhair great poem vary deep, like scars
On May 18th 2008 stephaguilar21 Said :
stephaguilar21 this poem is the truth in a sdad depressin way!!!\
On April 16th 2008 bearcub690 Said :
bearcub690 this is very good, i liked it
On April 8th 2008 dancingidiot Said :
dancingidiot It's very good. And to that dude down there. STFU, this was a good poem.
On April 8th 2008 Kirstinbabe301 Said :
Kirstinbabe301 Wow thats deep! I love it!
On April 5th 2008 corbin92295 Said :
corbin92295 sad and deep...i loved it
On March 25th 2008 tashc92 Said :
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wow! this is deep & sad i lovee it
On March 9th 2008 jessisakura16 Said :
jessisakura16 Really amazing. Reminds me of some of my thoughts sometimes...
On March 9th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX That's excellent, it describes every teenager that no one cares about. good job
On March 5th 2008 LoveAngel12 Said :
LoveAngel12 4 GET ALL DA HATERS DAT WAS GUD LOVE IT
On March 2nd 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :
smlesarahsmile freaken lame. why is everyone wanting to kill themselfs nowadays? just take in like everyone else. dont encourage things lke this
On February 26th 2008 LesbotwinPOCWL Said :
LesbotwinPOCWL I like it, it actually brang back the pain I used to feel and still partially do. Great job! :)
On February 25th 2008 SugarBunny331 Said :
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this is sad but excellent
On February 25th 2008 XxpreppyemoxX Said :
XxpreppyemoxX that's sad.
On February 24th 2008 deathbat67 Said :
deathbat67 wow this pretty much describes every dpressed teenager whose experienced a broken heart, who has parents that don't listen, and friends who aren't there when they need them... good job, i really like it:]
On February 19th 2008 a106 Said :
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THAT WAS LIKE THE BEST PEOM EVR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On February 19th 2008 a106 Said :
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THAT WAS LIKE THE BEST PEOM EVR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
On February 18th 2008 ash101457 Said :
ash101457 wow i am speeches