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starting over |
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Life |
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Everyone |
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so called friends |
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so called friends |
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will you love me |
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starting over
She was a teenage girl says the curling irons, blow dryers, cotton balls, make-up and nail polish in her bathroom;
She was an athlete says the gloves, cleats, and spikes on her bedroom floor;
She has a bright personality says the colors of her pillows, bedspreads, stuffed animals, and curtains in her bedroom;
She has a lot of friends says the table piled with birthday gifts;
She lives with her grandparents says the antiques and collections in the house;
She spends some weekends with her mom says the suitcase in the corner;
She has younger siblings says the toys in the toybox and the clothes on the floor;
Her dad is absent says the empty chair at Christmas Time;
He was never there says the lonely nights and the upset children;
She was looking for a better place says the school and the meetings with ones close to her;
Her new life is like a new day in the spring time says the flowers outside and the fresh air;
In the beginning life was rough,
She's starting over now.
| On February 2nd 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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i luv it!!! |
| On October 16th 2007 AmberRenee0147 Said : | |
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u know i can totally relate to this and it made me feel rly good knowin that sumone is feelin the same as me
Thank u so much
amber |
| On October 13th 2007 nifjjnig23 Said : | |
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this poem is great
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| On August 22nd 2007 emily28793 Said : | |
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great poem |
| On July 17th 2007 amishatcollege Said : | |
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i love this...it was great |
| On July 5th 2007 bluedevilschic Said : | |
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i really like it. keep up the good work. |
| On July 2nd 2007 loza801 Said : | |
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that is sooo good.....should be published i LOVE it |
| On June 23rd 2007 pqhtm Said : | |
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Damn is all I can say |
| On June 17th 2007 rockergirl929 Said : | |
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this poem is verrrrrry good. |
| On May 28th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said : | |
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wow is all i can say |
| On April 25th 2007 kathryn1212 Said : | |
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I feel that you have a lot of talent and I truly wish you the very best with all of your dreams and ambitions. Kat |
| On March 4th 2007 JagIsEre Said : | |
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Wow this is really good
U got some talent =] |
| On February 24th 2007 miahopscotch43 Said : | |
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At first this poem reminded me of me, but then after a while..It didn't...This is pretty good. |
| On January 28th 2007 yalegirl Said : | |
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that was like really good |
| On January 20th 2007 loverkristen Said : | |
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thats fantastic. |
| On July 4th 2006 JennyBenny Said : | |
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i thot it wuz a poem ritten by her bf'z sister!! lmfao!! rofl!! ttul chloe!!
~Jenny |


