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roses!?
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Created on 4-19-08
roses are red
violets are blue
my love for you
will always stay true
Please Login to post comments| On September 26th 2008 brokenwings122 Said : | |
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This is deffinately cute, although a bit juvenielle for a poet as distinguished as you...although perhaps thats part of its value? I could go back and forth on this all day, but I want to apologize for taking so long to review your work. If you wouldn't mind reading a few of mine, specifically Full Moon Rising and Story Book Romance, I would greatly appreciate it. Best of luck! -caiti |
| On May 8th 2008 individulsong Said : | |
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cute. |
| On April 23rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ gotta love the simplicity of roses :) |
| On April 22nd 2008 valiantvivian Said : | |
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Short, simple to the point. Who wouldn't love it. |
| On April 21st 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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short and right to the point! Amazing! |
| On April 19th 2008 Poolggrrll Said : | |
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yupp what they said ^ |
| On April 19th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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cute |
| On April 19th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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cute |
